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    Rihards is offline Member Frequent Poster
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    Default First page of chap.235 edited by me

    This my first time so critics are alloved [IMG][/IMG]

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    Fuscion420 is offline Senior Member Frequent Poster
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    Do the rest from 171 on in english and you will become my god k.

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    yoshis007 is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    hm.. I see a bit of the previous text in the background, so you could have been a little bit more careful with that

    in the upper left panel... the right bubble.. is that gramatically correct o_o;; it took me a few times to finally get what it says

    it'll also be nice if you could do the sound effects

    but.. other than those minor details

    you've done a pretty nice job

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    Good work.
    *Praises you*

    I love Steal! <3

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    andysislands is offline Senior Member Well Known
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    You want critics? Here it comes.
    Firstly, '.gif' format isn't the way to go. '.jpeg' or '.png' are more widely accepted formats. '.png' is the most used, but I have just gotten lazy on my releases. I know there is a couple of good '.png' code crushers on the internet, to get the most image for your file size.

    Next, I know you are using the Chinese scans. I can tell just by the log on the left page. Either remove the logo, or replace with the Japanese one.

    Some people like double page spreads, others like single page. I think double page spreads make it look like you were too rushed to split the pages up. Of course this doesn't stand for whent he image covers two pages.

    Even if you go with one or two page scans, you got to get rid of the "scan by polo" at the bottom. It might take some work to clean that out, but it will make the page look much nicer.

    You also got to clean up your raw better. Way too many fragments left.

    Finally, stop everything you are doing. I know you want to make more chapters and all, but this isn't the way to do it. MESSWORLD translations are off limits.
    [This verison is translated by me... please don't repost it anywhere else.]
    Even if it isn't stated on every translation, it is implied. So, if you want to make more scanlations, please use your own translations, and not steal!
    Know Chinese or Japanese? Want to help with Shaman King, Jyuki Ningen Jumbor, or Butsu Zone translations?
    See this page for details!


    Mankin-Trad Scanlations Updated: (July 13th, 2007)
    - Jyuki Ningen Jumbor 07 coming soon!
    - Shaman King: Kang Zeng Bang reprints are released in Japan! Scans (English and Japanese) from Volumes 1-7 on Mankin-Trad now!

 

 

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