Entertaining chapter. Looks like Swampstorm was right about Akira getting Tenma into the action.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
It's good to have vindication that Eri has suspected that Harima loves Tenma for some time now (since 207). Otherwise, she wouldn't have suddenly changed the script to make it a choice between the manga and Tenma. And now, even if she isn't completely certain, her suspicion must at lest be far greater.
I wouldn’t be so sure about this, since we can’t be sure that Eri changed the script on her own accord.
Right before they go to shoot the scene, Akira takes Eri aside and talks to her alone about the scene with Harima, and mentions Tenma helping out in the scene. Akira seems to know about Harima and Tenma working on a manga, judging by how she seems to have gotten Tenma to get Harima over to the manga room and her knowledge of the manga being important to Harima.
Considering Akira had a plan involving Tenma and the manga, it’s probable she told Eri to change the script, and didn’t tell anyone else about the changes.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
I don't think that this chapter is particularly good or bad for any faction; on the surface it seems to be incredibly negative for Flag, but it could be a trigger for future positive development like Eri's shaving of Harima's beard and hair.
I agree, here.
Though, I give the advantage to positive development happening to Flag, since the movie is being orchestrated by Akira, the literal embodiment of Deus ex Machina, and Akira is on Eri’s side.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
Is Akira happy or upset in the last panel? Her expression looks more negative than usual, but it's Akira... she could be either unhappy that her plan backfired or happy that everything is going as she had foreseen.
Who knows? The makeup she’s wearing makes her expression look darker than it is.
Trying to read Akira’s facial expressions isn’t usually a good idea, though; since her expressions are so neutral, whatever expression you see is bound to be influenced by what you want her facial expression to be.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
And finally, Yakumo ain't got nothing on Eri when it comes to playing the villain.
Indeed. It’s nice to know that Eri is better at acting than Yakumo, although I already knew this after the play arc.

Originally Posted by
reinard-fox
Yakumo's eyes shows some kind of pity (not to Eri I think, pity that such a situation occured). Eri's are a kind of empty. Which is worse?
How are Yakumo’s eyes showing pity? Her eyes are neutral and empty.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
Hmm. Comparing the two pictures, Yakumo is actually a little worse since she acted intentionally, while Eri probably tore the manga out of disappointed shock.
Uh, premeditated assault is far worse than tearing up some paper in the heat of the moment, not just a little.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
On the other hand, Harima was entirely an innocent victim here while Eri deserved some sort of chastisement in 211. So Eri still leads in overall villainy.
If Eri acted out of shock because she realized that Harima loves Tenma, then Harima would have just seriously hurt her feelings, making him not innocent by your logic.
One thing you’re not mentioning is that Eri reacted after possibly being hurt in this chapter, while Yakumo slapped Eri with absolutely nothing being done to Yakumo.
Also, physically attacking someone> tearing up some paper in terms of villainy.

Originally Posted by
ratzuei
This is looking interesting. I dont think that this will end the flag, the most it could do is to left the faction in the same status as onigiri(in coma).
Onigiri is in a coma for three reasons: first reason, neither side is interested; second, the plot never focuses on it; and, finally, neither side is interested.
Unless Kobayashi stops focusing on Flag and/or makes Eri seriously lose interest in Harima , Flag isn’t going to be disappearing.

Originally Posted by
Lith17
You have to admit, Harima is getting closer. This is pretty much the closest he's been to having Tenma notice him in that light.
I didn't notice Tenma suddenly changing her opinion of Harima in this chapter. Harima looks no closer to having Tenma notice him in this chapter than any other.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
But I'll try anyway. Harima will be mad. Tenma will be flustered; maybe she'll be confused or upset that Harima chose her over the manga since she doesn't understand the true motive yet? She might even call him stupid for it... or she could be touched and impressed. Or both.
Harima getting mad at Eri likely wouldn’t do much for his chances at Oudou, since he’d be focusing his attention more on Eri than Tenma; putting his (angry) feelings for Eri above his feelings for Tenma. Besides, his claim that the manga isn’t important to him won’t look very honest if he starts freaking out about it.
As for Tenma, I don’t see her interrupting the scene as anything strange between Eri and Harima (they fight a lot in front of her, and she did witness the shaving incident), and I bet she’d credit any extreme bickering between the two and Harima’s confession to her to “acting” on their parts. They’re filming a movie, after all, and Tenma is dense.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
Or Eri could silently fume while Tenma acts confused over why Harima chose her and suddenly interrupt by shouting out the truth to Tenma
Why should Eri do this? Eri implicitly says that her friendship with Tenma is more important to her than Harima last chapter, so I doubt she’s going to do any shouting at Tenma.

Originally Posted by
NeoSapien
this is the most exciting possibility but also the least likely because it would trigger the climactic confession from Harima...
Not really the most exciting, since Harima confessing won’t be the climax of the story right now. For one thing, the plot has not been building up tension for Harima confessing his feelings for a long time; the story switched towards building up Eri’s feelings being revealed to Harima a long time ago (that’s the reason Akira changed the movie last chapter, in case you forgot). Also, Harima’s confession would be outweighed by the melancholy felt by Eri, making Harima’s “rejection” of Eri the climax of the scene, not Harima’s confession.
Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he does not become a monster. And if you gaze long enough into an abyss, the abyss will gaze back into you. - Friedrich Nietzsche
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