....two hands More rumbled than the original one. Make Tenma and Mikoto his foots, and we will have super rumble
Karasuma is.....thats waaaay too sadistic, I feel so sorry for Harima!
I guess too much NHK for me. atleast I took out the toilet scenes that I was planning on putting in the middle. ^_^"
So I suppose it is alright if I advertise my Fan-fiction here?
Truth be told, this is a fiction I created a LONG time ago, and after chapter 5 is up somehow my desire to continue it just vanished somewhere along the way...
Lately, though, I have this burning desire to continue my fiction... It would be nice if I could get some feedback from you guys (and girls) first, though.
Here's the address: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2990173/1/
Its in fanfiction.net, under Anime, School Rumble. The title is Twist, Twist, & Turn.
A couple of things that you all should note first, though:
1. Back then, I am not supporting any factions in School Rumble yet, as stated in the rants on one of my chapters. As for now, I must say that I like Oudou pairing the best, although this doesn't necessarily mean that I will use this pairing in my fiction.
2. My opinion about some things in my rants have changed for now, like for example, my current top 10 characters list now is now different from the time I created that fiction.
Anyway, I gotta admit that I am a bit stumped on how I should continue my story. I have an idea, its just that I am not quite sure about it. Any feedback or suggestions on how I should continue my story would be GREATLY appreciated. It would be great also if you guys make a review of my story. Thanks beforehand.
don't worry pizza_blade, any crossfiction and fanfiction is welcome! ^^
I haven't read the whole thing (I'm at work so I keep getting interrupted) but I like how its written. compared to mine. my work looks too simple. (I have to work harder for my next one >_<). keep up the good work! ^________^
I started playing zelda now I'm semi addicted to it and I figure i might as well do a crossover with SR.... I's like to do a haruhism Crossover to.... but there's no haruhi crossover thread.... (WE NEED A HARUSHIM FORUM! :S)
Btw I'm usuing characters from Oot (Ocarina of Time)
Link would obviously be Harima... the Hero (male lead)
Zelda would be Tenma because she'd kind of be the unreachable character even in appearance she looks more similar to Eri then Tenma.
Saria would be Yakumo, the close friend who always willing to help and always stick to your side.
Eri would be Princess Ruto... being fish has nothing to do with it... it's more of the fact that Ruto starts off all bossy and complaining about lInk then after he helps her she's all over him. Well it's nothing like Eri but she's slowing falling to the dark side...:P
Tae would be Malon... no reason really... just to fill in the gaps...
Who would Gannondorf be? Link's Arch nemisis?... the only person I can think of is Hanai.
Not really good at thinking up stories on the spot... someone else can do it for me if they want lol .
Here's a pic of some of the Zelda's Characters http://chibi-rinku.deviantart.com/ar...ic-XP-52813238
Last edited by kniteowl; 01-17-2008 at 07:59 PM.
*The Groom stands in front of an altar with a radiant smile in his face. As soon as the bride has reach the altar. the chapel door swings open and a white prince has entered*
White Prince: I'm against this marriage!
Groom: Ha! as if you can do anything to stop it
*the white prince draws a sword and challenge the groom*
Groom: It looks like you see things the way I do
The groom pulls out a fishbone-looking sword
White Prince: En garde
*The two blades meets and the sound of metal echos through the halls of the church*
Groom: hmmp not bad but let's see if you can win if I go ...
*The groom's hair turn into gold and a large energy surrounds him*
Groom: *BEep beep* HAAAA!!!!
*The white prince blocked the blow but it was so strong that it broke the blade and sent the prince flying*
As the prince consciousness fades ... an image of the bride runs through her mind
White prince: I ... will not FALL!
Groom: give it up. your blade is broken. your body is weakened. you have lost
*The prince pointed the broken sword at The groom*
Groom: I see .. then let this be our final blow
*The two passes each other with a swift movement.. and the prince falls to her knees*
The Groom: Congratulations. I Harima Kenji ... accepts defeat ... *a thunderous sound echoed when he fell on the ground*
The prince: Yakumo ... my love
Bride: Sawachika-sempai ... My prince
Akira: as the two stared at each other eyes. Their lips met and a passionate kiss followed
Tenma: that is so romantic! Are we gonna use this on the play?
Eri: HELL NO!!!
I was planning on using the XXX kick as the final attack but meh ^^
and for the Eri vs Harima scene. the picture of Saber vs Berserker is running through my mind XD