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It's still not the impact I'm searching for - maybe I will find idea for something else next time - now, I will leave it to someone else to write a fanfic :)
And damn I need to improve the English.... When I read it again I used such basic structures It's almost hard to read..
That's fine, though~ I use complicated words and no one understands what they mean, so people just don't read my works. xD
don't worry, that's an amazing work after all. and beside, your english is still better than mine, look.Quote:
Originally Posted by Kolox
nice!
a Love hina parody might end up like this........
Keitaro: Harima kenji (but of course)
Naru: Eri (I'm an onigiri but eri makes a better Naru)
Shinobu: Yakumo (duh! ^^)
Mutsumi: Tenma (err great minds think alike?)
Kitsune: Mikoto (D!)
Kaolla: Ichijou (athelicism: the only thing they have in common... ahwell)
Motoko: Akira (I know its weird but well she is)
Tama: Iori (don't ask me why ^_^)
but my heads still in cloud nine at the moment so I won't write anything yet. just came back from my vacation ' _ '
Make Iori wear turtle shell :D We will be waiting for your work :)
.. oh, and Welcome Back :)
Well, since most of you must have seen it. And some of characters are so similar.
Cast:
Tenma - Lina Inverse (for obvious reasons)
Harima - Gourry Gabriev (both are idiots though Harima is a bit more intellegent)
Yakumo - Sylphiel Nels Rada (well, nothing in common, just because Sylphiel X Gourry)
Mikoto - Amelia Wil Tesla Seyruun (both are cheerful. and large breasts)
Asou - Zelgadis Greywords (they are similar. absolutely)
Lala - Shabranigda (they have sooo much in common)
The Story
The story begins in restaurant were our herous are resting after tireing battle with the King of Evilness of this world, Red Priest Rezo (Itoko), who they killed two days ago (reason for battle: drunk-to-hell Itoko called Lina a fattass, becuse Tenma has just eaten her lunch accidentely - Yakumo thought that Rezo (Itoko) was a bit wrong and attacked him (her) with Dragon Slayer, which destroyed restaurant, where the fight took place, along with the whole town, and killed Rezo. The second consequence of Yakumo's wrath was that our Herous were forced to run for whole two days being chased by townspeople). So now, after this epic battle and not less epic maraphone they are resting in the little restaurant, eating everything that they can see. Suddenly, a suspicious person enters.
Asou: Look, Lina, some strange guy just came in. And he looks like he is planning something.
Tenma: Nyahthpthy, whats so suspicious?
Asou: Well, he is naked and holds giant axe.
Tenma: Aa, let him be, we have more important things to deal with right now - that chicken looks so damn tasty.
Asou: Do as you wish, but I'll keep an eye on him for a while.
Suddenly the naked Giant grabs the owner of restaurnt:
Giant (Yoshidayama): Money or live, you.......
Amelia (Mokoto): WTF?! Lina-san, look! We must stop it right now!
Tenma: Who cares? Just eat, eat. Thats what we here for.
Mikoto: How can you be so cold hearted?! OK, i'll deal with him by myself! (climbs on the table) Listen, you dirty burglar!
Yoshidayama: WTH?!
Mikoto: Here, the Justice is here! In the name of Itoko Give-and-Take club....ups, I mean in the name of Law I'll kick your sorry ass!
Yoshidayama: WTF?! Who is justice - you?! Don't make me laugh, piggy-girl! (punches owner of restaurant) I said give me money, you......
Mikoto: Don't ignore me, Dirty Burglar-san! Freeze Arrow!!!!! (hits Giant with arrow, but it doesn't even bothered him).
Yoshidayama: Ha! Yopur childish magic is nothing to me!
Mikoto: HUH?! Elmekia Lance!!! (again no effect) What?! Elmekia Lance! Elmekia Lance! Elmekia Lance! Elmekia Lance!
Tenma: Ahhh, you are noisy! Zel, shut them up please. I'm too full to do anything...
Asou: Ok. Fire Ball. (Huge explosition. Giant and Amelia are lieing on the floor unconscious.) Done.
Tenma: Thanks! Hey, Owner-san!
Owner: Whaaaat now.
Tenma: You sould give us a huge discount - we saved your restourant after all.
Owner: What?! Yopu destroyed the half of it! Get out of it now!
Asou: Fire Ball. Now we can quietly leave till he is uncontious and can't start another chase after us.
Zelgadiswas always my favourite :D Asou is pretty good cross overing him :D
A nice piece of fan art Reinard-kun :D
P.S but what about Gourry-Harima ?? Did he got captured by love-sick Yakumo-Sylphiel in inn room ?
Well, after arrival in another restaurant-hotel Lina ate so much that fell asleep wduring the supper and they had to drag her to her room. And after that Sylphiel had pretty nice time with her childhood friend.
... where's Gourry-Harima?
ah, well that's a good story,they become the villain this once ^_^
^^
Tenma: I am Edward Elric and I have come to look for the Pilfered Stone!
Yakumo: Nee sa.. Nii san were looking for the Philosophers stone not the Pilfered stone.
Tenma: HWEE?? but I'm been making posters about it since last night T^T
Harima: Don't worry Tenma cha.. ahem Ed san. I, Mustang shall help you make some new posters!
Tenma: YAY! Thank you! Harima kun!
Harima: its Mustang, Ed san
Eri: ahem excuse me colonel but were busy looking for homunculus ourselves so leave this kids alone.
Harima: I'm a colonel! Hawkeye, I have a higher rank than you! I....
*Harima sees death in Hawkeye's(Eri's) eyes*
Harima: I'm sorry Ed san!
Tenma: its alright!
Karasuma: you don't have to look for us. were here already
Tenma: Karasuma kun!
Karasuma: I'm Wrath, Tenma chan, a homonculus
Nishimoto: and I'm Lust
Everyone: *surprised* noway!
Imadori: isn't Lust supposed to be sexy, I'm Barry btw
Nishimoto: is there anyone out there who can match my inner Lust
Harima: hmm good point
Nakamura: excuse me Wrath sama but we should do what we came here for, oh and I am known as Envy I can changed my appearance at will
Karasuma: we came here to make you guys open the gate
Eri: you'll never make us do something that crazy
Karasuma: Tenma chan can you open the gate for us
Tenma: leave it to me!
Harima: do you need help Ed san?
Eri: you guys!
*the gate was open and the world was overrun by the great power from the other side, also known as the "Akira"*
The End
Tenma: WHAT? THATS IT?
Yakumo: Nee san, it already ended
Hanai: I haven't even made an appearance, Yakumo kun I don't care if your an empty shell! I'll fill you up with my Love!
Mikoto: *hits Hanai* That sounded creepy and perverted at the same time!
Eri: let this end already! and thats it!
Nishimoto: Das!