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    vatenkeist is offline Member Frequent Poster
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    Default make ur own dialog comix..

    hey guys... ive done the short manga.. but i left out the dialogs so u guys can have fun with your own version...



    the panels are numbered so u can use it as a guideline..

    u can also use narrator words..

    eg.

    1) narrator: its christmas and tenma is thinking

    tenma : what shud i use to eat karasuma..


    my version is this one..

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45948125/

    plz be original and dont follow others.. a few similarities is okay... so get cracking guys!! XD... i wanna see some amusing stuffs..

    EDIT: posting a clean version.. for those who want to do their own speech bubble 8D...

    Last edited by vatenkeist; 01-04-2007 at 11:15 AM.

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    Kolox is offline Senior Member Community Builder
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    1.
    Tenma : Harima-kun destroyed my plate and I don't have time to make another one for replacement...what should I do ??
    2.
    Yakumo : Nee-san, I think Karasuma was happy that you wanted to give a present - it's a thought which counts
    Tenma : You...me !! That's it !! I will send myself with a box full of curry !! Uhm !! That's a great idea
    (Kolox edit: I wonder which one of the presents will be more pleasant for Karasuma : Tenma or Curry ?)
    3. Tenma : I'm sure Karasuma will be very suprised when he see me jumping from the present box (Kolox Edit Again : So you actually can tell from his face when he is surprised ?? That must be love...)
    4. ( A little order mix of who is speaking first)
    Yakumo : Nee-san, I don't think that's a ....
    Tenma Not listening) I need to prepare curry !! I know, I will give it to him with my seducing Miss Santa costume !!
    5. Tenma : Merry Christmas's Karasuma I have your favourite...
    6. SFX : Wind -wshoooo, wiuuu, wruuu, smruuu (how the hell wind sounds !!)
    7. Tenma : Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy !!
    8. Karasuma : A letter to santa ?? But today is 5th January ... -_-

    P.S It's pretty hard to off the original part - pretty obvious what had happened - and those blank boxes wouldn't be big enough for my writing needs so I think I would fail as mangaka...

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    rikem is offline Senior Member Long Time Member
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    loool XD i love your sfx , kolox xD

    yeah i second kolox on the fact the comic is not very generic to do new things with. but well i tried.

    PS: sorry for the very bad english



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    Kolox is offline Senior Member Community Builder
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    A real rumbled version of it I bow in front of you with respect !

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    rikem is offline Senior Member Long Time Member
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    thanks ^___^ i just really wanted some ice cream xD



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    Sozzi my Engrise sehr bad ....

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    rikem is offline Senior Member Long Time Member
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    loool XD that was something great xD



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    vatenkeist is offline Member Frequent Poster
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    kolox xD LOL thats nice!.. *gives cookie*.. better than mine..

    what i meant was.. i know the ending is the same.. but i wanna hear the middle part.. and u guys dont need to write it coz i left the blanks just for any dialogs to fit... doesnt really matter if its long or short.. just post it here.. dont mine the speech bubble.. that was taken from my original work and erased... 83 any length is ok.. (ermmm did i make it clear? *scratches head*)..

    EDIT: lowl kolox i think u'll make an excellent dialog writer 8D...

    rikem : ZOMG ROFL SNORT... ice cream... *rolls arounds LOLing*
    rakka : LOLOLOOLLOL lost child ... xD

    great guys!!! i love the creativeness...

    im posting this on my DA page... seriously...im saving it now 8D..
    Last edited by vatenkeist; 01-04-2007 at 10:32 AM.

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    @ vatenkeist-sensei: Great idea!


    Tenma: I need to kill the alien, but I don't know how: his security is so good, It's impossible to get near him.
    Yakumo: Hey boss, the chief of FBI is on the phone.
    Tenma: Hell yeah! I got it!
    Yakumo: Were are you....hey, what about FBI?!
    Tenma: I have no time for that, I have to prepare guns!
    North pole:
    Tenma: Die you monster!!!!!!!
    Tenma: Heh?! Where the hell i aaaaaaaaaam?
    Karasuma: HUH?! A death note?

    Quote Originally Posted by Kolox-sensei to Rikem-sensei
    A real rumbled version of it I bow in front of you with respect !
    Quote Originally Posted by Rikem-sensei to Rakk-sensei
    loool XD that was something great xD
    I second this!
    Last edited by reinard-fox; 01-04-2007 at 10:50 AM.

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    Kolox is offline Senior Member Community Builder
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    Rakk, Die 'Verlorenes Kind' ist geniale
    Ich habt keine Ahnung Tenma hasst ... damn - forget it - I can't speak german
    I liked the idea with Tenma's language

 

 
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