Post your fan art here, And the comments too.
I'd suggest you maybe posting this in the Creative Works section. I don't think anyone minds it being here, but I'm not sure if this is a good place to post it.
Anyway... I can't draw... ;_; I wish I could. Your picture is pretty good. You may want to check the actual manga on the hair. Something looks a tad off. I'm not a big fan of the facial expression either. I don't mean to sound harsh; sorry if it comes across that way.