Well, that was better. Still not great, but better.
The Dream Wedding: My first one-shot Naruto fanfiction.
Naruto: the Secret Songs of the Ninja: My epic "what if" story where Sasuke never survived the battle against Haku.
Top ten reasons why NaruHina will become canon:
7. Naruto saw Hinata dancing naked in a waterfall, and he totally digs that.
10. Hinata has giant boobies.
I agree this is the Naruto chapters I am use to, it isn't great but it isn't filled with BS @$$pulls. I don't think it will ever redeem itself, however just keep this level and we should be fine. Although seeing as how she just pulled out that bone technique from Kimmi, I am surprised she isn't using more techniques. She just kind of hovers around and blocks attacks, goes into another dimension and that is it. If you know you can't surprise him with the dimension thing, why not stop and try a different attack. Perhaps one that doesn't use so much chakra...
"I got rid of my teeth at a young age because... I'm straight. Teeth are for gay people. That's why fairies come and get them. "
Aqua Team Hunger Force
I think it was an ok chapter.
Nothing much happening and Naruto plotting how he can beat her.
Chapter was just plain... but the more I read the more upset I got for the fact that this "All powerful Supreme God" is really stupid and having trouble doing what she needs to do!! How godly is she you ask? She's the originally established NINJA GOD'S MOTHER, who defeated the reincarnated NINJA GOD (Madara)... also the black goop seems to the be brains of this operation and its quite evident if not for that, she would've been defeated quite easily.
"He is now declaring his words to the WORLD!"