When you wrote "Tetsou then sees a couple run towards their car armed with their gas bomb" I thought you meant, they come running towards our new car, with the bomb in their hands. Because I didn't think we'd have a line of sight to the rigged car.
About the shots, I didn't assume anything really. You said automatic fire from the main road. Tetsuo will assume it's the soldiers at the checkpoint (not the ones at our fence). Just because the direction fits and they are carrying rifles. Automatic fire is very distinctive, and those kind of weapons rarely end up in the hands of citizens. And he wouldn't assume a real 'terrorist' attack to take place.
The last part is too bad. If I had known that we can't see our target fence from our current parking spot, I wouldn't have written that I get to the car. Because if we can't see the soldiers there, we have no way of knowing if some of them get drawn away. Could also be that 30 additional soldiers showed up just now.
Had I known that we can't see it, I would've proceeded to the roof and watched from there. And then gotten to the car when an opportunity presented itself. There would be a delay were things can change again, but it's better than going in blind.
But it's cleared up now.
would you rather have me re-write you on the roof? I can but you have to wait till monday, a little busy at the moment.
No need to. In the end, it doesn't change anything. In the time it would take Tetsuo to get down and to the car, the situation could change and be the same that we find when we just drive around the corner.
Ok, finally a request to see how Naomi is doing. After this, Shin will find Tomoe, whos with Takezo and Dino...
Then its off to fight the Brothers...
Just asking, what are you guys planning to do?
The only action so far would be Takezo trying to get his hands on the spear. Nobody is there to stop you, so you don't have to wait for an update, dharma.
You will be able to pull it out.
If there is nothing else, like Tomoe reacting to Takezo's presence/action, or whatever Shin wants to do after he finds the others and checks on Naomi, I'd like to get on with it. I don't know what palp is doing these days, but from past experience I could pretty much guess. Don't know if he's even playing anymore, but I'm not gonna kill Naomi off.
Which means Shin will find her breathing. If palp is around, he may wake her up at any time. If he isn't, she'll stay unconscious and I let dharma deal with his absence.
Let me know if that's all you guys want to do (as if).
i'm just waiting to see how tomoe reacts to takezo yanking the spear out roughly from the dead body.
Posting later today. Just giving a heads up.
Looks like i won't be updating as much as possible. The place i work at has blocked ST... sigh
^ Yeah my local library blocked it now so I can only get here from my internet cafe, thats why its taken me this long to update.
I havent tried onemanga there yet since they blocked this place. Shall update when I know.
Maybe we can work around it somehow. Because if you guys can't be as active anymore, because of it, things won't end well.
Off the top of head, how about something like this. Make a stupid wordpress blog (i should still have a test one). When a new post is made, I copy+paste it there. You can read what was written and write yourself.
I can also post your work here, if you don't mind me having your login.
ps: Man, what a liar. First he goes "Let's finish off the brothers (translation: kill them)" and then he says "I have no fight with you". Not to mention that Andre had heard the first comment. At least you backed down. Since you guys still didn't realize your vulnerability despite Makeiru, Sean and even Dino's death (and Dino was the strongest Fighter in the team), I thought I'd have to take a more direct approach (in the form of the brothers pounding on you).