Good work dharma
occ: "I'm surprised Sean doesn't want to take revenge and I hope that you don't keep waiting for the boss to show up"
minues(thinking): he might be right. Goes to toilet to get revenge.
occ: "okay, now your boss see's what you are doing"
Nicely done.
But I don't really get why Sean is so suspicious. I mean the guy did kill him, but they had gone to a restaurant to eat. Best friends do that and Hayaki ran out to get help. Plus, Sean didn't tell him about his allergy (hayaki had to find out about it through medical files).
How come he suspects him nonetheless. Couldn't it be that the cook made the mistake of putting peanuts in his food.
I think it might be a good idea to elaborate why Sean suspects him. Like he remembers that when he was looking for something on/in Hayakis desk he saw the peanut oil bottle. Or he saw a flash of Hayaki doing something to his food when he got back from the toilet. Something to let him believeably suspect him, that was burried in his subconscious until now (or something he just didn't think about anymore).
Because as it is, this feels a bit out of character (especially for Sean). But it's just a suggestion. You have to be satisfied with your work, I'm just along for the ride.
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