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    hisshouburaiken is offline Senior Member Regular
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    Default 236 Translation

    I'm not getting shit done at work today, this is a very welcome break.

    Page 1:
    Text: Kurono's room becomes a battlefield! How will he defend himself?!

    Page 2:
    Title: Purifying Light
    Vamp: Look at this snivelling little shit.
    Vamp 2: Hahaha!

    Text: He can hide his plan, but not his fear.

    Page 3:
    Vamp: We can just kill him, right?
    Vamp 2: Why don't we all get him at once?
    Vamp: Okay, on three.
    One, two...

    Page 4:
    SFX: BZZT!
    Sfx: (lights humming)

    Page 5:
    SFX: Paperlike skin cracking

    Page 8:
    Kurono: Hahaha...

    SFX: ::Click::

    Page 9:
    LeadeR: Hmm?

    Page 10:
    People: W-What's-
    AAAH
    SFX: Gunshots
    AGHH

    Leader: Hey, wait a-

    Page 11:
    Kurono: I...
    Leader: I got this.
    SFX: Gunfire

    Page 13:
    Kurono: I'm...

    Page 14:
    Reika: Over there!
    Someone: Hey, the lights all went out.

    Reika: Huh?
    SFX: Beeping/signal from the Gantz things in their brains

    Kaze: This is bad.
    Katou: Damnit!

    Reika: We're going to get sent to the room
    any minute now!

    Page 15:
    Kurono: I'm...
    I'm...

    Page 17:
    Kurono: I'M THE GANTZ TEAM'S
    LEADER!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Page 18:
    Text: His battle prowess returns to him.
    Next time, there will be a major revelation, and a huge battle.

    (Of course, next time means two weeks from now.)
    Last edited by hisshouburaiken; 07-03-2006 at 09:09 AM.
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    Excellent chapter! Here's a quickie translation:

    Page 1:
    The battle field is Kurono's apartment!
    What are his countermeasures against the intruders?

    Page 2:
    Title: (Ultraviolet)Light sterilization

    Foreground: Hide your plans, not your fear

    Vampires: Ha, look at the idiot trembling under the sheets
    Ha ha ha ha ha

    Third:

    Kurono: trembling sfx

    Vampires: We can kill him, right?
    Try taking a shot then
    Lets shoot on my mark...
    Shoot!

    Kurono: gripping sfx

    Page 4:
    Light sfx,
    shaking sfx, (the lamp, not the vampire)
    Kurono: Heavy breathing sfx

    Page 5: Chiri chiri, which are burning or flaming sfx

    Page 8:
    Kurono: trembling sfx,
    Ha.. haha.. ha

    Page 9:
    Leader Vamp: ...the fuck?

    Page 10:
    Other residents: Hey what? what?
    AAAaaggh!!!
    etc etc

    Lead Vamp: Hey, wait...

    Light sfx

    page 11:
    Kurono: I'm....

    Lead Vamp: 'He got us...' or 'We got served...'

    submachine gun sfx

    electricity sfx, wobbling sfx

    Page 12:
    Electricity sfx
    lights going out sfx

    Page 13:
    clicking sfx

    Kurono: .....I'm....
    heavy breathing sfx

    page 14:
    Over there!
    Huh? Is it a blackout?

    whatsherface: Huh?

    Muscle: Shit...

    Katou: This isn't good...

    Whatsherface: We're going to be transferred to the room soon!

    Page 15:
    Kurono: I am... I'm....

    Page 17: I am! I'm the leader! of the Gantz Team!

    Page 18: His fighting instincts are revived!
    Next episode, after the battle, there will be an important
    announcement.


    Yaaay! Personally I think Kurono will die in the ensuing fight, but will be revived back into the gantz room. Excellent!

    Translation notes: I was mostly faithful to the original japanese text, but I took some liberties with the translation, because personally I hate it when translaters do a literal job and just translate the japanese words into english. It really makes for crappy reading.

    For instance when the vamp leader says "He got us" he's really saying in the japanese text "he did it," but in a slangish way. So I put the other potential translation of "We just got served..." Another example, when all Kurono says is "I am, I am..." for like 5 pages, it just sounds weird. Or rather it should, but everyone has been numbed by bad tranlsations of japanese text.

    AAAh I'll end my rant, and this isn't about you Hiss, you make excellent translations
    Last edited by NiseJapanese; 07-03-2006 at 09:05 AM.

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    hisshouburaiken is offline Senior Member Regular
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    Quote Originally Posted by NiseJapanese
    Excellent chapter! Here's a quickie translation:
    Translation notes: I was mostly faithful to the original japanese text, but I took some liberties with the translation, because personally I hate it when translaters do a literal job and just translate the japanese words into english. It really makes for crappy reading.
    Yeah, that's why I don't do it
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    Hmm... maybe the Team will be sent after Kurono since he remembers... now that would be awsome! Kurono vs Gantz Team!

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    Yeah, but he's friends with everyone now, and since none of them have any points anyway, they'd just wait the time limit out and go back to 0 rather than fight him.

    Except maybe Inaba, but then everyone else would slaughter him in a second.
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    Could Kurono die and get to GANTZ? I LOVE THIS!

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    thx alot m8s! love this chapter

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    I'm guessing the blond dude's gonna kill him, not knowing that he's in fact helping Gantz.

    -Rah

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    Holy crap. Awesome chapter. Especially how all those vampires heads explode ^_^

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    Curse Kurono for wasting his points to save himself and not save the Tomb Raider chic, only to end up back in the game a while later.

 

 
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