01-28-2006, 01:20 AM
haha you should get someone else who knows japanese to go over the sentences with question marks and the sound effects. you can use it if you give credit.
Originally Posted by Saithan
01-28-2006, 04:16 AM
2 to 4 days
Originally Posted by Kochiro
01-28-2006, 04:17 AM
Text: The memories that come to Linali's mind and...!?
Linali: Rabi, i was thinking that if i returned to the ship, i'd properly apologise to you. Even though you were heart broken about what happened to Allen, thank you for worrying about me the same way. Anita's important hairclip... looks like i shouldn't have borrowed it after all... Allen-kun, I... have decided to believe that you will come back alive.
71st Night: The price of destruction
Text: She that is locked up by restraints, that is where the strained power is
Eshi: Eshi is a sturdy type.
Linali: what? really?
SFX *Pikipikipiki* etc
Eshi: What are you doing?
Linali: the effects of the forced release... have come faster than i'd thought
Linali: starting to break...
Eshi: that despair is unacceptable. I should kill your struggling
Linali: It's impossible
Linali: you were already broken before
SFX: *DON* *doh* *do* *do* *do*
Eshi: what's the matter, excorcist? Struggle!
SFX *do* *do* *do* etc
Eshi: Struggle! Struggle! Struggle! Struggle! Struggle! Struggle!
SFX: *hyuki* (air rushing past noise?)
Linali: Dance... of the Kirikaze! (mist wind)
SFX *DON* *BAH* *fuooooooooo* (wind noise?)
Eshi: Above... is a falling competition-
Eshi: -Between you and the iron shackles!
How pitiful... Eshi cannot be pierced by you
Linali: N..o. You gave me pow...er
Eshi: She suppressed her Innocence's power...!?
SFX *gya* *gya*
Linali: This is it.
Linali: This is my final attack. (lit: this is the attack of my final moments)
Eshi: !! could it be that... with that excessive gravity...
SFX *SASAN* (splash?)
Rabi: eh? wah... what? the boat has... floated back up!?
Crowley: how convenient!
Bookman: GO, RABI!!! knock then down-----!!
Eshi: !! KAH.
Eshi: kakakakakahkakah no matter how many tens of thousands of tons of gravity she can accumulate, its still increasing?
did she receive my attack for this purpose?
Text: Taking the gravity from Eshi, Pierce him!!
lol i like fighting chapters. not much text
i guess the power of her boots is to control gravity rather than defy it then?
ill fix that up
01-28-2006, 11:39 PM
people always get credit for their help, but I think I'll put this project on hold for a while since we're releasing history's strongest disciple kenichi as a side project...
ohh and I'll go through the translation as well :P even though I've only been learning japanese for the past 5 months or so, btw you should consider uploading your translation to Mangahelper where a bunch of translators are, if you have problems or questions they might be able to help.
01-29-2006, 03:55 AM
I saw 73 raw right now
[color=white][color]Is Rinali Dead PLZ NO
PLZ GOD NO
01-29-2006, 10:49 AM
Sometimes I wonder if I'm the only one who doesn't like Rinali......
01-29-2006, 02:47 PM
I'm sure there're ppl who don't like Rinali. Would be nice if there were more than just two main female characters...
And... I don't really think it's a spoiler Blood Flame as nothing is confirmed. Not until I see a coffin with her body in it anyway. >_>
01-29-2006, 11:38 PM
73 raw is out?
ok here's 72
72nd night: and then the sea disappears
Cover text: I believe in the world--- no matter what it may have (check plz)
SFX *DO DO*
text: taking everything...!!
Eshi: kakakakakah kah. Eshi is unshapely... damn you...!!
It won't stop...!!
This speed, gravity and spontaneously generated energy is...
this pressure from the opponent is as though it is like a meteorite
how long can it be withstood with Eshi's body!?
Your body is burning out due to the air friction. Are you intending to take me with you,/die with me, woman?(lit: 'Is she intending to make a fellow traveller?' its one of the two, object of the sentence is not clear)
Eshi: but... if i pull through this...! kah kah Eshi... ka-can* win... kah*... the only one who will turn into ash is you, woman! kih kakah
you are gonna be destroyed...!! gakah
This aint no joOoOoOoOoOoOoOoke!
*the japanese word for win is 'katsu' the writer linked the ka of his kah kah noise onto this word so it seems like Eshi is stuttering. this wasn't an exact translation so i substituted. The second asterisk links to the word for ash but its hasn't got the normal pronounciation (it's read 'kasu'), so again, the same effect, but it doesnt translate over
SFX *zu zu zu zu zu* *bou...*
Linali: Ah.. Anita's... hairclip... No... Don't burn... you are important...
Linali: Eshi... you can still withstand it?
I can't let you live
You are vanishing here, with me!
Eshi: KakaKoh Gopi... kah... gokakah Aah
SFX *Pikih* (on Eshi's hand) *gigi* *jijijihbu* *piki* *bu*
Eshi: ...tah... tah ta....h*
*in japanese, the pronounciation for title is spelled taitoru, eshi in the last frame of the previous page stutters the syllable ta.
SFX *DOKUN* *ki* *PAAAA* *GOki*
SFX *KI ki ki* *bokoboko* (bubble sounds) *fuoooooo*
SFX *GO* *pa-jah* (splash) *kigi* (rattle) *buh* *PAAN* (shatter)
Linali: niisan... Komui-niisan...
Linali: I'm sorry
Text: Linali triumphs! but, without her body...
she's not confirmed dead yet, just MIA
D.Grayman is lacking in female leads anyway. they can't let her die that easily
either that or they'll introduce someone else
01-31-2006, 12:12 AM
Its Hard to read the Text tranlated lets wait for Timpaci
01-31-2006, 03:20 AM
nubjuckie: Thanks a lot^^ \o\
I don't like linali too, but she's not dead. she won't die, at least not now. because there is that whole Allen/Linali thing happening. I mean, main characters are almost always imortal