My Song

Here's a song I wrote:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yeGIXBpIUhA&fmt=18

are you lip syncing?

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You singing it or just wrote it?

i wrote and sang it. I recorded the sound first, then the picture later with my camera. since my camera sound quality isn't good.

On that bright Saturday morning, I was learning a completely different point of view from what I had been taught by my poor dad. At the age of 9, I grew aware that both dads wanted me to learn. Both dads encouraged me to study... but not the same things.My highly educated dad recommended that I do what he did. "Son, I want you to study hard, get good grades, so you can find a safe, secure job with a big company. And make sure it has excellent benefits." My rich dad wanted me to learn how money works so I could make it work for me. These lessons I would learn through life with his guidance, not because of a classroom.My rich dad continued my first lesson, "I'm glad you got angry about working for 10 cents an hour. If you had not gotten angry and had gladly accepted it, I would have to tell you that I could not teach you. You see, true learning takes energy, passion, a burning desire. Anger is a big part of that formula, for passion is anger and love combined. When it comes to money, most people want to play it safe and feel secure. So passion does not direct them: Fear does.""So is that why they'll take a job with low par?" I asked."And you don't?" I asked."No, not really," said rich dad. "If you want to learn to work for money, then stay in school. That is a great place to learn to do that. But if you want to learn how to have money work for you, then I will teach you that wow power leveling. But only if you want to learn.""Wouldn't everyone want to learn that" I asked."No," said rich dad. "Simply because it's easier to learn to work for money, especially if fear is your primary emotion when the subject of money is discussed.wow gold""I don't understand," I said with a frown. buy wow gold for cheap ..."Don't worry about that for now. Just know that it's fear that keeps most people working at a job. The fear of not paying their bills.wow gold, The fear of being fired.wow gold, The fear of not having enough money. The fear ofstarting over. That's the price of studying to learn a profession or trade, and then working for money. Most people become a slave to money... that is wow power leveling web page for cheap wow power leveling, and then get angry at their boss.""Learning to have money work for you is a completely different course of study?" I asked."Absolutely," rich dad answered, "absolutely.""Yes," said rich dad. "Some people say I exploit people because I don't pay as much as the sugar plantation or the government. I say the people exploit themselves. It's their fear, not mine.""But don't you feel you should pay them more?" I asked."I don't have to. And besides, more money will not solve the problem. Just look at your dad. He makes a lot of money, and he still can't pay his bills. Most people, given more money, only get into more debt.""So that's why the 10 cents an hour," I said, smiling. "It's a part of the lesson.""That's right," smiled rich dad. "You see, your dad went to school and got an excellent education, so he could get a high-paying job. Which he did. But he still has money problems because he never learned anything about money at school. On top of that, he believes in working for money."

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@OP; I think the reverb levels were a bit high. Also, on the bridge/break mid song the chord change is interesting but at the same time it sounded kinda awkward imo...But overall, it was good. Probably if you add some more voice harmony on the chorus something interesting might come out (:

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I think the song is good,as well as the lyrics.Keep it up !
(And sorry that I can´t give tips :P - that´s why darkus is here ^^)

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actually, i didn't create that chord progression (I wished I had). It's really well known among certain genre of music. I probably first saw it played by gabe bondoc over youtube once, and somehow it found its way into my song.