Thread: Artisan Manga [ 20-page Short Story Manga ]

Short Description:

"Art, the son of a legendary speed-builder, seeks to understand his deceased father by following in his footsteps."

Link to full manga:

http://community.livejournal.com/man...sts/46786.html





Cheers,

-Kaz

I like your idea of using architecture -it was different and a fun read. I don't actually have too many critical things to say because I'm so used to reading series and having character development or the fleshing out of a plotline (etc) so I understand that there are some things that would have to be heavily done (*I guess what I mean here is that it's at a high climax for a good portion).
Would you consider ever making a manga where the ending was a surprise or not happy?