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Old 04-11-2008, 07:08 PM
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Page 1 Soul bun legend by ~imdfantom on deviantART

that is chapter 1 am I mistaken but is it really that bad(I know It's not very good but is it bad?)

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Its not bad. Bad meaning every thing is deformed. Just needs a little work. Keep working on it and it will turn out nice. Do you have a tablet? If you do you should get Manga Studio. Its located some where here in the forums.
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I was always thinking - if they pay for all the food, they can't go bankcrupt as they should have made profits for each meal they make. If I had a bar and could sell everything I had in it, that would mean I say goodbye to it and make something else

Other than that, you need to practice shading.
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Does a father sell food to his son?+ he was only kidding The boy eats too much and the father always makes fun of him

I just drew this in pencil photocopied it filled in the lines with a black inked ball point pen, scanned it then used photoshop to insert the words(this is a horrible waste of photoshop's potential but hey)+ fix mistakes made during inking then uploaded all 16 pages to DA BTW this may seem stupid but i don't really normally know the process of making comicy things I just stick to reading them normally so: What do you mean by "TABLET"
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here you go: graphic tablet
but you know...it's really not that easy XD

my recommandations regarding softwares and the process:

first draw them normally, on paper. in pencil.
scan them .
ink them in flash that is....IF you have a gph tablet. but it's not that cheap and just buying it for the sake of .....nothing isn't a good deal.( flash is superrrb for inking, I must say, although I know the majority here don't do this.XD)


Manga studio is pretty hard to master since you can't use scanned images . Although it's terrific for manga-artists, I think you'd find it pretty difficult to use tablet freely( without scan I mean)
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I like it, the characters are designed or drawn in a unique fashion and the artwork itself is very clean. It seems to me that you have some problems with drawing effects in clean lines and you could use some references for background art. If you have time, check out kunoichi-san 's art on dA.
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Yeah thanks for explaining "cherry blossom" and thank for advice "everything" + "war dude" I appreciate that you liked it "friend in arms"
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So it is true - my nick really means "Everything" - lol. And it was just random words I inserted once, guess there is a meaning for every word.
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Well think about it. Not every comic has to look the same. If you dont have any problems with different poses and point perspectives you shouldnt really have any problems. Sure, its not the best looking artwork but its your own style. Ive seen many comics that I think to myself, "What the freak am I doing wrong that I dont have mine out yet", but what matters most is the creativity you put into your work and if you are a good writer that can tell a story, again, youll be fine. Im a artist but I always hate my own work only because I push myself each time I draw. Im never happy with my work.
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awww its not bad dont worry i like it =3

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