763 years after the fall of man (Is this a specific event that should be capitalized?)
, a young Honovian male named Hania Dyani age 16 (Why is this important to know? You did just say he was young.)
is about to undergo (Undergo is one word.)
the test to become a Guardian like his father before him. Along with his best friend Yamka Elu age 15 (Same thing.)
he will face the hardships and Triumphs of the 7 trials of Essen chant (Capitalization seems random, but I can't tell without knowing more of the plot.)
. Unknown to Hania, Yamka holds a spiritual bond with her friend that is much more than just friendship. She can feel everything he feels. Along their (I'll discuss this below.)
journey Hania will put to the greatest test anyone could endure: the death of his family. In the end will Hania be strong enough to endure the pain and sadness of losing the greatest thing anyone can? Or will Hania fall by the wayside (Wayside is one word.)
like so many others before him?