Need some help with the begining of my story
763 years after the fall of man a young Honovian male named Hania Dyani age 16 that is about to under go a test of to become a Guardian like his father before him. Along with his best friend Yamka Elu age 15 will face the hardships and Triumphs of the 7 trials of Essen chant. Unknown to Hania, Yamka hold a spiritual bond with her friend that is much more than just friendship. She can feel everything he feels. Along there Journey Hania will put to the greatest test anyone could endure the death of his family. In the end will Hania be strong enough to endure the pain and sadness of the greatest thing anyone one can loss his family? Or will Hania fall by the way side as so many others before him?
Now the begining of the chapter (it starts at the end of the story-
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