I'm pretty impartial to starting new series but this one seems like a good counterbalance for my current webcomic. However, I'm not very good at drama/ romance storylines so tell me what you think. Please don't give me feedback like "It's good" or "It sucks". Elaborate for the love of Einstien on your response!

Storyline: On the edge of a small village, two lovers, Ian and Zaiden, are torn apart due to a war. Their only form of communication are their cell phones. However as days become weeks, weeks become months, and months become years, the two realize how they've changed both individually and in their relationship.
(sorry I suck at writing a synopsis =_=)

http://www.ymimps.com/BP0-1.html