Well, I created this comic just out of boredoom, as you can see I had to translate it (Since i am from Mexico I did it in spanish to post it on another forum) Hope you like it, altought my art isnīt precisely good, but perhaps the story would be entertaining for you XD
I will put more scans later... I need to translate them first..
And donīt be fooled, this story isnīt just about that girl doing a love monlogue, thatīs just the begining, doing a quick synopsis this is a love comedy with battle elements (Think of it as Ranma but without people changing into animals and without Rumikoīs art)
PS: If you can tell me a program to translate that is better than paint, please tell me... and if you have any tutorials, better XD.
Ironically, this was first posted by me in Narutofan forums XD
Hmm. Well, to be helpful, try to make your writing and speech bubbles as clear as possible. It's really hard to read or follow anything your characters are saying right now.
As far as the art, well, just keep practicing. Are you taking art classes? Studying anatomy? Looking at references and pictures when you draw your characters? Have read about the basics of composition and color theory? Manga/comic panel design?
I think these are things that can help you improve your art. Just go to google.com and type in "the basics of composition" and you'll be surprised at how much you'll learn :)
practice makes perfect!! thats the only way to really learn your own style
Well, I have been practicing a lot and I have made like 4 chapters (Total of like 100 pages) and I think I have kinda improved, I will put more scans when I can.
Its neat! I like the fact that you bothered to translate the work for others to read!
I guess that's why some of the balloons are either too small or too large! Very Manga like!
Keep up the good work!
hmmm...the story looks promising and interesting, i like it, your drawings are good, you just need more practice, i cant wait to see more.