You're really good. The only problem I have with your drawings is the characters' stance and proportions. More than once I've felt like their neck or their leg or their arm is being twisted. Like the last image you drew: Everything is good, except it feels like the neck is too long (though that might just be because it's against my preference) and her legs look to be drawn incorrectly. Both of her knees seem to be facing us, but everything below the knees seems to be twisted unnaturally to her right.
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Thanks for pointing those out. Looking at it now, I totally get what you mean. Her neck does seem a tad too long. I did notice the knees too. u were meant to see some of the front of her left knee, but not as much as I ended up depicting.
Her neck is really bothering me now haha.
that's incredibly good
Last edited by nikkoo; 07-30-2012 at 08:18 AM.
I just noticed you edited it 5 days later, and now am curious as to what you originally put.