Thread: My Newest Deviation!

Yay!

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/47670974/

Tell me what you think........

Honestly... i dunno. it seems too much like a picture. It lacks alot of realism in things like the shape and size of her hair, her clothing standing out too much and not being places it should (her right shoulder), the fishnets are too solid and thick, the background is really really nice but flat. Her facial features are well proportioned and colored which is good but her hands look like her wrists are broken.

it ok I guess.

Overall it looks great, but there are a few things that you can do to make it look a lot better. SD did say most of it...

honestly i think the hair shape (just fix her hairline) and fishnet are perfectly fine.

But yeah, it looks like she was cut and pasted on top of the background. Her skirt does stand out too much, which doesnt make it look like it belongs with the picture. Tone it down some. And her arms w/ the fishnet, they stand out too much...like add more shadows or something. The last thing that sorta bugs me is her ear. Pull it back some, meaning like make it look like its more on the back of her head. Not sure if u want to do this, but simply cover it with some hair (not all of it but the front portion). That and since there is a lot of hair around it, it shouldnt be that bright, just only at the outer portions.

But definently it looks good! Just touch some of that stuff up the way you want, and it will look a lot better imo.