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    These are a few thoughts I wanted to share with you I had during math class about a week ago i was feeling pretty down.

    Please ignore the grammar malfunctions! [EDIT BY TET] I fixed the spelling that i noticed. XD

    HI

    Hate....has left me with loneliness and nothing more.

    over shadowed by bitterness I'm left with rage.

    what was once happiness has been transformed and skewed into oblivion.

    I long for the true meaning of life the love of another,
    But that is the unreachable through out life for it is impossible for u give all your heart!

    men die for the thoughts and ideals of a few idiots who have lived life but those dying will never see the truth.

    H................A................T.............E, is the core of all emotion.

    beyond image lyes the true mentality we should all follow but as long as we see with our eyes forever we will be imprisoned by discrimination.

    Men search for a reason to live only to waste their life trying.

    Faith deludes the mind from all i would be happy if there was a supreme being but thinking there is one makes you lifes fool.

    things you find pleasure in should be your priorty.

    Live life to the fullest but when its empty don't ask for more!

    Enjoyment leads to addiction and addiction leads to failure.

    Love is the feeling you get when caressed by a lie!,Hate is the feeling you get when you discover the lie

    All people wish to make mark on society but most will fade into oblivion without a remembrance to there existence.

    A.d.d really means Healthy Child.

    To kill is stupid for it wrecks two life's at the same time...................................Bonus Points!!!!

    To be blinded by light fuels shadow.

    The key to one mans heart is to cause pain to another.But that same man will protect if it twas not him who caused the pain.

    To relive ones self of hate is to lose all feeling.

    What is normal......is it you the reader or me the writer or the feeling of vulnerability when you express your self.

    Every man is stupid in the grand scheme of things.

    Is the pursuit of Knowledge worth dying for?

    To feel compassion for someone you barely know will only lead to pain.

    What is success........................................... .................................................. .................................What you think i know!


    PS, I'm not emo.

    BYE
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    Have you been listening to "The Sunscreen Song" by Baz Lurhman? If not download it, it's worth the listen. Ill probably upload it it the "Music Trading" thread i made in the music section, be sure to check it out.

    I'm a fan of poetry, and i like how this is written, (id post my own if i wernt so shy) Tho' it may not be poetry i think with a few changes it could make a good one. Here are a few edits i would make.

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    Hate.

    Has left me with loneliness and nothing more.

    Over shadowed by bitterness, I'm left with rage.

    What was once happiness, has been transformed and skewed into oblivion.

    I long for the true meaning of life the love of another,
    But that is the unreachable for all life for it is impossible for to give all your heart!
    [I would consider revising this.]

    Men die for the thoughts and ideals of a few idiots who have lived life, but those dying will never see the truth.

    H.A.T.E, is the core of all emotion.

    Beyond image lies the true mentality we should all follow.

    But as long as we see with our eyes forever, we will be imprisoned by discrimination.

    Men search for a reason to live. Only to waste their life trying.

    Faith deludes the mind from all.

    I would be happy if there was a supreme being but thinking there is one makes you life's fool.

    Things you find pleasure in should be your priority.

    Live life to the fullest, but when its empty don't ask for more!

    Enjoyment leads to addiction, and addiction leads to failure.

    Love is the feeling you get when caressed by a lie!
    Hate is the feeling you get when you discover the lie

    All people wish to make mark on society, but most will fade into oblivion without a remembrance to there existence. [good but i think its unnecessary.]

    Add really means Healthy Child. [?]

    To kill is stupid. For it wrecks two life's at the same time.

    Bonus Points!!!!

    To be blinded by light fuels shadow.

    The key to one mans heart is to cause pain to another.
    But that same man will protect if it was not him who caused the pain.

    To relieve ones self of hate is to lose all feeling.

    What is normal?

    Is it you the reader? Or me the writer? Or the feeling of vulnerability when you express your self?

    Every man is stupid in the grand scheme of things.

    Is the pursuit of Knowledge worth dying for?

    To feel compassion for someone you barely know will only lead to pain.

    What is success?

    What? You think i know!?


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    well its not suppose to be poetry there just feelings i had on a bad day i felt nervous posting it but you made me feel better thanx.

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    Its cool. Still i think you should refine it a bit, tho' it is not a poem, ill see it that way, and i recommend that you do more!

    I uploaded the song i was talking about Here.


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    Quote Originally Posted by tetnubis View Post
    Have you been listening to "The Sunscreen Song" by Baz Lurhman? If not download it, it's worth the listen. Ill probably upload it it the "Music Trading" thread i made in the music section, be sure to check it out.

    Lol, I love the Sunscreen song. Everyone should listen to it!

    Anway, to add to Tets corrections: In ** format!

    Hate.

    Has left me with loneliness and nothing more.

    Over shadowed by bitterness, I'm left with *nothing but* rage.

    What was once happiness, has been transformed and skewed into oblivion *I would consider changing this to another negative emotion, like despair*.

    I long for the true meaning of life*,* the love of another*.*
    But that is the unreachable for all*,* for it is impossible *to give your all*
    [I would consider revising this. *I tried a revision, dunno if it works*]

    Men die for the thoughts and ideals of a few idiots who have lived life, but those dying will never see the truth.

    H.A.T.E, is the core of all emotion.

    Beyond image lies the true mentality we should all follow.

    But as long as we see with our eyes forever, we will be imprisoned by discrimination.

    Men search for a reason to live. Only to waste their life trying.

    Faith deludes the mind from all. *Of what? Reality?*

    I would be happy if there was a supreme being but thinking there is one makes you life's fool.

    Things you find pleasure in should be your priority.

    Live life to the fullest, but when its empty don't ask for more!

    Enjoyment leads to addiction** and addiction leads to failure.

    Love is the feeling you get when caressed by a lie!
    Hate is the feeling you get when you discover the lie*...* *I like this part lol*

    All people wish to make *their* mark on society, but most will fade into oblivion without**remembrance to there existence. [good but i think its unnecessary.]

    Add really means Healthy Child. [?] *ADD? Like the disorder?*

    To kill is stupid. For it wrecks two *lives* at the same time.

    Bonus Points!!!! *?*

    To be blinded by light fuels *the* shadow.

    The key to one mans heart is to cause pain to another.
    But that same man will protect *it, if it* was not him who caused the pain.

    To relieve ones self of hate is to lose all feeling.

    What is normal?

    Is it you the reader? Or me the writer? Or the feeling of vulnerability when you express your self?

    Every man is stupid in the grand scheme of things.

    Is the pursuit of Knowledge worth dying for?

    To feel compassion for someone you barely know will only lead to pain.

    What is success?

    What? You think *I* know!?

    All in all I like what you done, you've expressed your feelings and asked questions that no one can really answer, but it invokes thought and individuality. There are a few confusing parts but I still like it.

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    Here is part 2
    Once agian please ignore grammer mistakes.
    Hi pt2

    What is disturbed?I think its called knowing the truth.

    Its the pointless things in life that show true charcter.

    A lie is the only true comfort.

    Genocide is so important but the death of those that fall in battle isnt?

    You can never understand ones feelings until you experince them.

    To die for an ideal is as stupid as thinking it.

    Be nice as possible to everyone you never know who has owns a 45.

    Dont love your family just because find a reason.

    Humans are made for one reason to repreduce and nothing more.

    Your not special every one feels pain.

    Listen to your elders they have nothing else to live for.

    Pleasure deludes the mind its better that way.

    The crushing of a bug should equal the life of a human.

    Suicide is illegal because the goverment dosent want to touch your corpse.

    If there is a hell it is better than a loss of consciousness.

    To give you must recive ponder that.

    Fuck global warming you will be dead before it kills humans.

    Commiting sucide proves your not worth the gift of life.

    Order has brainwashed men.

    The ten comandments were written on oppisite day.

    Here are my thoughts and i want my god damn penny.

    Thanx for readin i might post agian later.

 

 

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