The guy reminds me of Squall fused with Snake.
I think he looks a little like Holland (Eureka 7) with longer hair.
Forgiveness - Clay's head looks too big.
Reason - The guys right eye is kinda big, the girls waist is a bit too thin and her legs don't seem long enough.
Everything else looks good.
No problem. Keep up the nice art work!
the girl is really cute in the second one i think ^^
His facial expression is interesting. He looks kind of preoccupied even though he has a gaping hole in his chest. I would make him look more suprised or in pain.