A few sketches i scanned

**vphamv** · 11-11-2006, 01:28 PM

**sperm worm** · 11-11-2006, 01:32 PM

good freaking god. those are SO well done. i love the last one (two, but they link, dont they?)
i wanna see that colored... omfg...

**KillYurSelf** · 11-11-2006, 01:33 PM

You're pretty good I'll admit I didn't look at every picture but from what I've seen you have talent...

**adrian gt** · 11-11-2006, 01:57 PM

Another artist i need to kill so much better than me!

**$ylas** · 11-11-2006, 02:14 PM

very good i like the venom batman. very well done
hope to see more

**vphamv** · 11-11-2006, 02:28 PM

Originally Posted by sperm worm

good freaking god. those are SO well done. i love the last one (two, but they link, dont they?)
i wanna see that colored... omfg...

yeah tha last 2 link together, bu i messed up when i scanned and croped it. and if i knew how to use photoshop or even had the program i would

**Elcura** · 11-11-2006, 04:25 PM

undeniable talent here, great pencilship (if I can call it that). First and foremost when working with exaggerated body types it's better to not exaggerate the muscles, even though it looks cool it kinda takes away from the overall image.

Secondly, exaggerated body types makes getting anatomy right hard, some are great while others are kinda iffy (generally if it looks good for longer then 15 seconds it's acceptable in a comic/manga type of setting but for full pieces you'll have to be a bit more careful).

Thirdly (is that even a word?), try adding some line weight to add another dimension of depth to your drawings, thicker lines for darker areas or heavy clothing, thinner lines for lighter areas and clothes. It seems like a task at first, but after a while it just becomes second nature. If you find it hard just find a good penman/inker and see how and when they use different line weights.

Lastly, becareful with your hands, it seems when you have someone holding something it looks odd, this is ok though because hands are a bitch to draw, even more so when they're holding something. I guess all I can say for that is practice makes perfect.

Otherwise, great job. After a while you'll probably start to get interested in inking or colouring, so if you do feel free to ask here for help or show off what you've done. I hope to see more work.

**vphamv** · 11-11-2006, 05:09 PM

hum...good points i guess, i dunno really know anything about art since i havent ever taken any lessons in all da 19 yrs of my life. and they are all incomplete artwork to begin with, i jus posted them cause i felt like it i guess. bu yeah i know abou the exaggerated body types, i jus usually like the way they look, it apeals to me, what can i say?. for line weights, its mainly cause these are stuff i did in highschool while board in class, and i jus never really tried to make things look official, jus tried to make it look right if that makes any since. um and iono what u exactly mean by full pieces, i actually like drawing hands, but only when it comes to drawing real life lookin hands, otherwise i jus kinda wing it. i actually wish i new how to do inking and coloring, u should teach me

. um i have alot more, bu right now too lazy to scan or even finish any of my drawings, it takes me a while to even do more than half most of my drawings cause i get tired of doin the same thing and start new things all the time. took me almost 4 months to get that 2 piece drawing of spiderman against the villians cause i go on and off.