Thread: darksnow's artwork

first of all i would like to say that i was looking around..and goodness..all of you are like better than me in drawing >_< but anyways..i posted this picture up just to share with you guys..and its just like a free hand drawing with a pen liner..so yeah...any comments are welcomed..

*its a pic of kakashi, iruka, sasuke, naruto and sakura XD



http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/4...600/img001.jpg -- heres the url if u really cant see the picture x_x

maybe it's just my browser being weird, but I don't see any pictures...

um..do u at least see the url or an x? if u do..right click..properties..find out the url and prob should be able to see the pic.. x_x

uhh, nope...I'll check again later on another computer.

i hope you all can see it now >_< ..lol..

It says forbidden 403 ;_;

i really want to see it cuz it's a naruto fanart <3

Originally Posted by darksnow_footprints

first of all i would like to say that i was looking around..and goodness..all of you are like better than me in drawing >_< but anyways..i posted this picture up just to share with you guys..and its just like a free hand drawing with a pen liner..so yeah...any comments are welcomed..

*its a pic of kakashi, iruka, sasuke, naruto and sakura XD



http://photos1.blogger.com/blogger/4...600/img001.jpg -- heres the url if u really cant see the picture x_x

http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r...ira/img001.jpg --second url

hope this url works this time...

everyone looks fat, besides naruto

constructive. fucking. crits.

if nothing meaningful gets added i'll add something in tomorrow

I enjoy your attention to detail and the clothing is well done, but you need to practice facial proportion so that those things do NOT go to waste and people can appreciate them without having their attention drawn towards flaws rather than what you do well.

If it helps, draw a dotted line down the face and across it, making a cross where you would put the eyes ABOVE the horizontal line and on opposite sides of the vertical line. The the nose starts where above the intersection and runs down along the vertical line. And finally the lips are below that, being divided in half by the vertical line. It helps some people, you might give it a shot.

Please understand that none of this is said with ill intent. I honestly believe that practicing with some guidelines in place can really help you out.