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    famousmako is offline Senior Member Regular
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    Default mako's fanarts :3

    yeah yeah! i love drawing characters from animes/video games and what not. anyhow, here's the first piece i'll show you guys...it's princess zelda with a new look o_o!!!

    http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41105767/

    ^_^ thanks for viewing them, guys

    comments and suggestions are accepted always
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    Efferus is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    Well not to be too critical, but the first thing I notice is there's something odd about the ear being so pointy and bladelike. Second is the left should and her tricept being a bit bulgy. I'll just leave it at that but otherwise nice work. Keep it up and post more. ^^ I'd be glad to comment and congradulate you.

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    famousmako is offline Senior Member Regular
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    No problem man! I'll try to fix it XD. Now was it our left or her left? o.o
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    Efferus is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    It's her right and our left ^^;; But you should see what I'm talking about. To me if you leave it the way it is I would say she is tiliting to the side so you can always leave the picture the way it is now But I'm just pointing that out.

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    famousmako is offline Senior Member Regular
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    Ah! Okay, so I tried shaping the right arm a bit, hope it's better XD. Also, I redid the ear a bit, hope it's not like a blade anymore XD...thanks for the help dude!
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    mmm i think her neck seems a bit short in some way :/
    but other then that? i really like it. nice color blinding!
    and i love the design on her dress.

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    Oh yes, I can see that now! I should have lowered that line that goes towards the neck, right? o.o
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    The picture looks great now. Thanks for considering our suggestions. Most people ignore my critique because they think I'm jealous of thier work or somewhat ^^;;.

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    Haha, there's always room for improvements! Well, when I'm not busy but I just so happened not to be at the time! And no, thank you sir!

    And don't worry about that...it's their loss ^_^
    Last edited by famousmako; 10-09-2006 at 08:04 PM.
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    to start, awesome colouring. A+ there.

    the structure however is a bit lacking, the face looks good but the hair looks too solid and clumped together, especially the left part. try drawing your hair as single strands (long, but worth it imo) and try to keep it flowing. the body looks strange, I think the appearance of the left arm is hurting your picture more then helping it (seems far to unnatural, even if she's doing something we can't see it so it doesn't do you any favours to have her arm out), the right shoulder is too broad and the right arm is kinda fat, the breasts are a bit low I think, maybe it's just me though (needs more perk?) and the left eye seems out of place.

    again, the colouring is top notch, what program do you use to colour in?

 

 
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