I demand to know what grammatical errors I have, though then again its darr whose saying this so I should just take that comment lightly. I decided to stick to small words like what sperm said since I have to agree with what he's saying at how it's better to read a poem that you understand then to read a poem that you have no idea what half of the words are.
Btw, heres the poem of the week:
Hole in my Heart
Hole in my heart
What a heavy start
What burden is this
This sensation, emotion
That causes me such a commotion
What is this hole in my heart
That tears my life apart?