11-16-2007, 02:07 AM
i made my own char but I suck in making profiles T_T anyway I dont have a scanner so I didn't have the opton for an original appearance I'd probably change it later here's my char profile
Rank: Yet to be decided (still in training)
Alignment: Organization (still to change)
Likes: Loves to go undercover and feels very comfortable in a disguise. Anything cute.
Dislikes: Doesn’t feel comfortable fighting in high places. She doesn’t freak out when in high places but prefers staying on a flat ground.
She also dislikes the sword claymore because she thinks it would cause her to grow unwanted muscles. She hates this type of sword to the point that she chose to wield a sakabatou she found in her burning house when she was still a child.
Personality: Very cheerful and very social causing other claymores to actually hate and pick on her. She’s not very good with aerial combat but jumps very high, because of this she sometimes fall on her face after jumping due to her sudden fear of heights. She’s clumsy yet very athletic. She’s very good with the aspect of yoma energy. Her ability to sense and control yoma energy enables her to manipulate her own yoki and use her original skill the Indignation.
Appearance: I’m thinking of drawing one but my scanner’s broken
Symbol: still thinking...
Hair Change: Rena can change her hair colour unlike other claymores. Her original hair colour is still colourless though. She uses this skill usually to hide and try escape the training facility she was abducted into but never succeeded for being too clumsy.
Indignation: Rena needs to do this move starting from a batto style position (sakabatou in its sheath while Rena’s in striking position). She then draws her sakabatou while releasing huge amount of yoma energy that she directs at the tip of her sword. The speed of the draw and the strike causes a very powerful centrifugal force that she creates a vortex that makes her target feels heavier upon contact and lasts about 4 seconds after strike. The yoma energy she used cuts the air and materializes into waves of razor sharp gusts that cuts almost anything especially cashmere, the range of this move is about 6 meters ranging from 120-160 degrees of area of effect.
Usually after the first strike she unleashes a series of strikes and slashes while continuously releasing yoma energy and successively creating waves of gust that obliterates everything in a blinding storm. She can continue this move for about five minutes then she jumps back to avoid getting caught in the vortex of wind and gravity.
Blink: (Only usable during day time) Rena uses her sword to reflect the sunlight which serves as her cover while she dashes in semi blinding speed making her look like a flash of light blinking its way from one place to another.
Her fighting style usually involves the complete usage of Indignation and Blink as a 2 part combo. She moves in with Blink then uses Indignation which she prefers to use at point blank. At night she prefers to avoid encounters because of the unavailability of her Blink.
As a child about 12 years old her village was ravaged by yomas. Nobody from her family was slain but she was almost killed by a yoma. If not for a group of claymores that happened to pass by she wouldn’t have survived. She didn’t leave unscathed though she was covered in bruises that she received by being dragged along by a yoma. Yoma blood also drenched her clothing.
When her parents saw her bruised and soaked in yoma blood they became afraid of her and abandoned her. Her brother pitied her but wasn’t strong enough to take her in, instead she gave her a sakabatou saying “I know this isn’t anything but maybe you can protect yourself with that.” A villager took pity on her and left along with her in a journey for a village that would accept them. He took very good care of Rena and likewise Rena felt affection for her saviour. The man adopted her as his daughter as they travelled for a new community. Rena kept the sword to remind her of her past life that she lost.
Rena loved her new father and she was always cheerful around him. She would sometimes pick apples for him which he would accept with a smile. To Rena he was everything.
However her new found happiness didn’t last long. They unfortunately entered a village which in that time was inhabited by a mass number of yomas. Her step dad didn’t survive but she did. She was thrown down a cliff by her step dad to save her from the jaws of the yomas that chased them. By sheer coincidence she was picked up by a slave trader that sold her to the organization.
After 4 years she remained in the appearance of a fourteen years old. The yoma implanted in her was special, it allowed her to change her hair colour. This feature usually made her comrades jealous. She hides her suffering with a gentle smile that fitted her angelic face.
Her suffering was ended when she met Gail, a trainee that trained along side her. They played together and became the closest of friends. Gail got her number after a few years leaving Rena alone again, but her last words to her was to always smile and be cheerful. Rena vowed that until she meets Gail again she wouldn’t allow herself to lose her smile and protect was she was given, a chance to live. She trained very hard to earn the right to be given a number and search for her friend.
In a commencement exercise she and her other claymore comrades were tasked to hunt a yoma in a secluded forest. Since most of the other claymores were jealous of her hair changing abilities they called her useless and unskilful since the only thing she could do was change her hair colour. The result was that no one wanted to go with her and left her alone in the forest. She refused to be sad as she imagined Gail walking along beside her as she walked the path alone in the forest.
A few hours later after her deployment she heard screams of pain and agony. It turned out that there was more than one yoma in the forest and ¾ of the trainees were all killed. A group of claymores bumped and knocked her down while desperately fleeing but didn’t bother to help her up and left her to die in the hands of 2 yomas. She sprung up to her feet to escape but it was too late the monsters already had her surrounded. She trembled in fear knowing death could be upon her in a matter of seconds. Then she remembered the promise she made to Gail, she grasped her sakabatou given to her by her brother then gave birth to Indignation. She managed to kill one yoma and scared off the other.
A trainer was watching very intently at that time. He approached her and said that if she could maintain her pace and cheerful attitude towards her job she would be able to be given a number soon. Joy filled her heart that moment and promised herself that she would meet Gail no matter what.
Last edited by hinagikukatsura; 11-16-2007 at 02:15 AM.
Reason: wrong links im removing them
11-16-2007, 02:56 AM
You posted it in the wrong thread. It should be posted here
I almost forgot be prepared for a harsh review of your character by PhantomMiria.
Last edited by Kaiserkreuz; 11-16-2007 at 06:14 AM.
11-18-2007, 05:33 PM
Hina, we've officially moved like ages ago...
The correct place you should post is really here...
News to Kolox, looks like you won't be the only yoma in the house.
11-18-2007, 11:21 PM
Come on people, let's all check in at the new forum and get the RP started
Yippeee! See you all there.
Click *Here* to view #40 Lindy Claymore RP profile
11-19-2007, 02:04 AM
Heh, that's cool So I am yoma again....
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