could you create a symbol for your Claymore?
In regards to playing a human character, I'm going to leave that for Tetnubis and Elcura to decide since they're the GMs. Ask them through Pms or check their posts regularly to see if you get the go ahead sign.
As for Id, I don't really have much to add in regards to the skills, you'll need to elaborate so we understand how it works. Also the skill needs to be approved by Tetnubis or Elcura if it is I'm fine with it. As for your history I disliked it because he appeared like a super secret experiment ready to kick into single digit ranks. Remember that the males have awakened and hardly non of them are remaining, which scarecely gives them the reason to continue experimenting such secret projects like this. He also looks like a recent experiment looking very young for a claymore (by looking at the pic provided) meaning he should have been produced after the decision was made that females will be produced as mainstream warriors. Being a lab rat itself is fine, I have no issues with it. But giving it bit too much spotlight seems quite odd at the stage the organization is in correspondance to their thoughts about the male Claymores in general.
My main concern is that you're attempting a skill that might be on par with Galatea or even better since it doesn't just control a limb, it stops the mind briefly with no fail chance. That and Crimson just looked like something not even single digits would be capable of what with growing a new arm each time you use it as a bomb (Regeneration of the limbs should be your forte if so, not pschiatric attacks)Quote:
Its not as powerful/complicated as you think it to be. It as simple as becoming drowsy. Its like taking a long trip in your car than suddenly you end up nodding your head trying to fight the sense of sleepiness.
In terms of effects, it would merely last a blink. It could reduce ones accuracy when they are currently attacking, stop a currently executing technique... but that does not stop the victim from continuing attacking after being dazed for less than a second. Surely they'd remember that they were attacking and they would certainly resume the attack.
I've removed Crimson. I merely added it after playing with Jedah on my emu, my original plan never had it in the first place.
As for the rest of your history I'm going to have to ask Tetnubis if it is allowed. I personally would like it if you just created a normal male claymore rather than a lab experiment but that is up to the GM to decide. Initially because of your skill and coupled with your history I didn't wish to approve of it, one by itself could possibly be accepted with some tweaking but the two together just sounded like a big no no. Also, the organization seemed like the type of people to experiement on higher ranking Claymores in general, I'm referring to Luciela and this is my personal opinion Miata + Riful (It just bothers me these two looks so much younger but both possess insane powers). Since we're not making single digit profiles I figured I would tell you to condense it down by alot.
I'll be back, need to do something.
EDIT: Just saw Tetnubis' post. It seems the males do exist meaning no Riful? Eitherway since there are enough males around + Isley I'm going to let it go in regards to Id's labrat experiment profile for now unless told otherwise. I will leave the plot and how the RP will start completely to Tetnubis.
I thought it was common sense but I suppose theres no harm in reminding. Please don't use asian japanese names(Or any other strange sounding names that just doesn't fit into the Medieval themes in Claymore) as your claymore's name. Keep it somewhat medieval or ancient. I'm referring mostly to Kazuki and Id?