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    Exclamation Carmel Kazmier

    A rising poet, and my girlfriend, tell me what you think of her poetry!




    afraid


    I think your cute
    but that's not all
    I'd like to know
    the guy at heart
    I'm scared that you'll
    reject me so
    I just stand still
    and hope for who knows.

    Carmela Kazmier



    all i


    All I do is think of you
    All I do is dream of you
    All I can do is wait for you
    and wait for the day you'll be mine.

    Carmela Kazmier


    are you happy now?


    Look at how you left us
    here is despair.
    We are all crying.
    Are you happy now?
    We are all in tears
    in pain
    with frowns
    Does it make you happy?
    to see us this way.

    Carmela Kazmier


    are you scared?


    I try and try
    to be your girl
    but I'm just stuck
    in this lonely world.
    I want you.
    I need you.
    you know it's true
    and I know that you want me too.
    but you just push me away.
    Why do you do it?
    you act so mean
    but I know you care
    you try to hide it
    because you have a
    rep. to protect
    is what you say
    wouldn't you rather follow your heart?
    or are you afraid to play the game?
    just admit, that you love me too.
    I'm sick and tired
    of playing your games
    when will you not be ashamed?
    since you are scared
    I will go.

    Carmela Kazmier


    Be You


    I'm surrounded by people who pretend,
    who aren't who they say they are,
    they are who people want them to be,
    a fake,
    yet I can relate,
    since I take part in this horrible act.
    I am not open about the real me
    and it's time I shall be.
    so I'm not a virgin
    and I don't like some people,
    I'm not the perfect student
    so what, accept me for me
    the girl I am, the girl I am to be.
    nobody's perfect, not you or me,
    so stop acting like you are.
    it's time you become proud of who you really are.
    so what if people laugh,
    would you really wanna live a lie?

    Carmela Kazmier



    because of


    I am lonely without you.
    I am a wreck.
    I am lost.
    All because of sex.
    I should've been careful.
    But I made a mistake.

    Carmela Kazmier


    before i met you


    I look at you
    from afar
    the way you look
    back at me
    makes my heart
    wanna fall.
    fall in love?
    fall away?
    which one could it be?
    I don't know
    because I haven't
    talked to you yet.
    I'm too afraid
    to say a word.
    I'm afraid
    I'll mess it up
    I just wish
    you knew how I felt
    because I am so into you.

    Carmela Kazmier



    Blue is the Sky


    Blue is the beautiful sky.
    Green is grass.
    Yellow is the bright sun.
    White is clouds.
    Brown is the dark dirt.

    Carmela Kazmier


    Broken Heart


    My heart has just been ripped out
    stomped on
    and thrown into the trash
    like a piece of crud
    I feel worthless
    like I'm nothing
    I don't belong
    at least not here
    my broken heart
    is aching
    is hurting
    for what you ask?
    'You' is all I say
    you are the reason
    the reason for my heart
    my broken heart.

    Carmela Kazmier


    can i get someone?


    Can I get someone
    who really wants me?
    Can I get someone
    who really needs me?
    Can I get someone
    who really loves me?
    I need a man.
    I need someone
    who can care for me.
    I need a rock
    to lean on.
    Someone who will
    be there for me
    through the thick and thin
    and never ever
    leave me or let me go.

    Carmela Kazmier


    Changed


    Why does it have to be this way?
    We canít just be friends
    Yesterday we laughed
    Today you walk right past

    Carmela Kazmier


    clouds


    As I look above me
    I see blue sky
    but it also has white stuff.
    It looks like cotton
    It looks like marshmallows
    their puffy.
    My mommy once told me
    that angels hide behind them
    she said they are called clouds.

    Carmela Kazmier



    crazy


    I may not know you
    but I do know this
    you make me laugh
    you make me smile
    your so cute
    my heart just melts.
    I just can't stop
    thinking about you.
    It's driving me crazy.
    I don't know what to do.

    Carmela Kazmier



    daddy


    Why did you leave me here with mommy?
    she scares me
    when we are alone I try to run away from her
    scared of what will happen next.
    I know you didn't mean to
    you were scared of mommy too
    so that's why I tell god to pray for
    ever since I came here
    daddy just to let you know
    mommy sent me up to heaven
    but I don't really mind because it really is a wonderful place
    god is very nice
    I tell him you didn't mean to run away and leave me
    and I tell him that I love you daddy and hope you are okay.
    but daddy god tells me now that I must go and live forever with him and his angels, so this is the end.
    I'm sorry daddy that I had to leave you this way
    I really miss you and one day maybe when you are in heaven you can come with me.
    Daddy I wanted to tell you one last thing before I'm gone
    I love you.

    Carmela Kazmier



    do i really care?


    You know I love you
    yes I do
    But do I really
    wanna be with you
    my feelings are strong
    but do they come
    from my heart.
    so do I
    do I really care?

    Carmela Kazmier




    first kiss


    I want to kiss you
    really I do
    but I'm just not ready
    at least not tonight
    it should be passionate
    it should be true
    but all I know
    is that I want it with you.

    Carmela Kazmier



    first time


    The warmth of your lips
    touching mine.
    A dream come true
    about half past nine.
    Laying in bed next to you
    moving back and forth
    like I never knew.
    I can't believe this is happening
    but yet I regret nothing.
    How is this happening all so fast
    but I'm glad it happened here at last.

    Carmela Kazmier



    he


    The leaves outside are rustling,
    I can hear the bird singing,
    singing,
    singing,
    singing,
    it's a beautiful song
    that only I can hear
    as I sit under the trees
    I hear the bird call me near
    he sings to me
    he sings,
    he is then joined by a she
    they both sing
    beautifully,
    peacefully,
    happily,
    satisfying everybody.

    Carmela Kazmier



    he is the reason


    I wish I could end this life of mine
    I wish I could just end it, let it
    be over, for there is no reason
    worth living, until I look
    at him. He is the reason I
    stay. The reason I live and
    breath each day that I do. He keeps me
    here and alive. For without
    him, I would parish.

    Carmela Kazmier



    her


    I went to the mall today
    and I saw you
    I started to walk up to you
    but then I saw her
    and it finally hit me
    that there was no more us.

    Carmela Kazmier




    i cry


    I lay awake half the night crying
    Knowing that we arenít together anymore
    People tell me to move on
    I see many boys and many opportunities
    But none of them compare to you
    I really have no clue what to do
    All I can really do is lie awake
    And cry for you
    Until you realize that you want me too.

    Carmela Kazmier



    i lost you


    Now that I lost you
    I wish I had you back
    It's true what they say
    'You never realize what you got till it's gone'
    But there's nothing I can do
    Now that your with her
    but hope that one day
    you can be mine again.

    Carmela Kazmier




    i lost you pt.2


    I lost you once
    but you came back.
    then I lost you again
    but you went to her.
    Now I'm alone again
    and there's nothing I can do.

    Carmela Kazmier



    i need a man


    I need a man
    who will always be around
    be right by my side.
    I need a man
    who will stay truthful to me
    even if a girl walks by
    lookin flyer than me.
    I need a man
    who not only wants me
    but needs me to survive.
    I need a man
    who will listen to me
    and what I've got to say.
    I need a man
    who will take the time to know me
    and not just shrug me off.
    I need a man
    who really cares about me
    and my feelings.
    I need a man
    who just plain love me for me.

    Carmela Kazmier


    i wish to be gone...


    I wish I could be gone
    and disappear from this world
    this world of hatred
    and nonmeaning
    I wish I could run away
    and leave the life that I live
    the life where everyone is on my case
    I wish I was invisible
    but yet in ways I already am
    right now nobody can see me.

    Carmela Kazmier


    I wouldn't, I couldn't, I'd never evuh


    Your look at me like
    you're against me
    what do you think I did?
    I see your nasty stares
    lookin at me
    like I've got it all.
    like I stole your man
    I wouldn't, I couldn't do that to anyone
    I'd nevuh evuh do that to anyone
    If you truly knew me, I'm
    sure you'd see that.
    So don't even try to
    blame it on me.
    I wouldn't, I couldn't, I'd nevuh
    evuh do that to anyone

    Carmela Kazmier



    i'm scared


    I'm scared of you
    because I could
    really care.
    I've never felt
    this way before.
    When around you
    I am timid.
    When around you
    I get nervous.
    I love you
    and you love me.
    But baby I
    just can't see.
    I'm blinded.
    I'm blinded by love.
    I really care about you
    and it's all true
    because boy
    I do love you.

    Carmela Kazmier



    incomplete


    I love you, I do
    and so badly want to be with you
    I love how you tend
    to my every care
    and let me know that
    you'll always be there.
    you tell me I'm beautiful
    and you say
    that I'm the only one for you.

    Carmela Kazmier


    jesse


    I can't stop thinking
    thinking about you
    the looks of you
    are driving me insane.
    You sweet smile
    touches my heart.
    Your laugh is like
    music to my ears.
    Your beautiful green eyes
    draw me near.
    And your soft blonde hair
    feels like the smooth beach sand.

    Carmela Kazmier


    l is for...


    l is for my longing to be with you again.
    o is for how overly excited I get before I see you.
    v is for the very big impact you've left on my heart.
    e is for the everlasting feeling of love you've give to me.

    Carmela Kazmier


    letting go


    What do you do?
    When you think
    you've found the
    right one for you.
    It's hard for you
    to let them in
    and show you
    really care.
    to let go
    and just be yourself.

    Carmela Kazmier



    Lies


    You say itís you not me
    But I can see the truth
    Just tell me
    Donít lie
    You donít love me
    Anymore
    You never did
    Why live a lie
    Yet donít we all live lies.

    Carmela Kazmier



    little girl


    There's a little girl
    who sits on the street corner
    waiting for someone
    someone to give
    her some food
    or offer her some water
    her family has passed
    and she has no money
    because she has no job
    because she is too young
    she sits
    and waits
    and wonders
    about the days to come
    will she live?
    or will she die?
    she is just a little girl
    alone and afraid
    with no family
    and no food
    she sits and waits
    and she is just a little
    a little girl.

    Carmela Kazmier


    little girl(song)


    Little Girl (song)

    There's a little girl
    who sits on the street corner
    waiting for someone
    to give her some food
    her family has passed
    and she has no money
    because she has no job
    because she is to young

    Pre-Chorus
    she sits
    and waits
    and wonders
    about the days to come
    will she live?
    or will she die?
    is the question.

    Chorus
    She is just a little girl
    alone and afraid
    with no family
    and no food
    all she does is sits and waits
    and she is just a little girl.

    This little girl just sits there
    and waits while people pass
    hoping that just someone
    possibly will stop
    stop and say hello
    stop and be her friend
    stop and offer her
    something worthwhile

    Oh... She is just a little girl

    (Pre-Chorus)
    (Chorus)

    So as she's sitting there alone
    she wakes up and sees the light
    someone reaches out their hand
    and takes her by their side
    now she isn't afraid
    now she is ok
    now she is not a little girl
    anymore...

    (Pre-Chorus)
    (Chorus)

    She used to sit and wait
    about the days to come
    would she live?
    or would she die?
    was the question
    this little girl has grown up
    she is no longer alone and afraid
    and now she's got a family
    so she doesn't sit and wait
    anymore...
    and she has grown up so much
    and isn't a little girl anymore...

    repeat x2

    Carmela Kazmier


    Lost


    I am the farthest star
    the one all alone
    by itself.

    I am the ant
    who is lost
    from his colony.

    I am the quietness
    when everyone else is loud.

    Carmela Kazmier



    Love


    love is a
    feeling
    not a word.

    Carmela Kazmier


    love isn't fair


    You think you know me
    yes you do
    you think that
    I'm the only one for you
    you think that
    I'm special
    you think that
    I care
    you think that
    I love you
    but love isn't fair.

    Carmela Kazmier


    Love Kept in my heart


    The love we share
    will always be
    kept safe
    inside my heart
    this poem is to show
    show you how much
    how much I care
    and to let you know
    that I'll always be there.

    Carmela Kazmier



    missing


    I know I love you
    but I can't help but to think
    I'm missing something
    a part of my life
    is missing
    is lost
    I feel that I can't
    I can't be free
    I'm bound to you
    stuck
    glued
    I love you
    I do
    but something
    something is
    missing.

    Carmela Kazmier




    my life cut short...


    I feel so hurt
    though you can not see it.
    Deep inside I feel pain.
    I feel that I can not go on
    go on any longer
    my life is getting cut short.
    I can't see
    I can't breathe
    it's getting
    shorter
    shorte
    short
    shor
    sho
    sh
    s
    .

    Carmela Kazmier

    my pain


    You look at me
    but do you see
    the pain that's hiding
    deep inside of me
    I can't see
    I can't sense
    I can't feel
    I can't touch
    I'm paralyzed
    because of your words
    your words have hurt
    your words have scarred
    and now there's a hole
    deep inside my heart

    Carmela Kazmier




    my pain is deeper than...


    My pain is deeper than the deepest of any oceans.
    My pain is deeper than the deepest of any cuts.
    My pain is deeper than the deepest of love.
    My pain is deeper than the deepest of caves.
    My pain is deeper than the deepest of holes.

    Carmela Kazmier




    nothingness


    As I look I see my life before me
    It flashes of how it used to be
    A happy future but as I see the truth
    I am scared.
    I open my eyes.
    A long road of nothingness is ahead for me.

    Carmela Kazmier




    party


    Loud noise, people dancing
    music blaring, stuff everywhere
    What is this?
    a party.
    Where?
    my house.
    oh no is all I can say
    I'm dead.
    I'm gone.
    everybody out
    I have to clean
    oh no my mom
    I'll certainly die
    if I don't clean
    this all up in time
    She's home oh no
    not clean yet
    I'm in trouble
    oh well it was fun
    too bad it didn't last so long.

    Carmela Kazmier

    rain


    I watch outside my window
    As I see what's falling down.
    They are small glistening beads
    like tear drops when someone cries.
    When I step outside it feels like
    buckets of water falling
    on me over and over again.

    Carmela Kazmier


    rain and rainbows


    As I stay inside today
    I watch outside my window
    as I see what's following down.
    They are small glistening beads
    like tear drops when somebody cries.
    As I sit and wait and watch
    for what is to come out next
    It's so cool and beautiful.
    It's an array of colors.

    Carmela Kazmier



    rumors


    Rumors are evil ugly things. They go around for everyone to believe. You think their all fun and games, but you never really know who your tearing down inside. Somebody is hurting because you keep spreading that rumor around. Have you ever even stopped just to think? About how that person is feeling right now? They hate everybody, right here, right now. Why do you keep spreading them if you know who your hurting? Are you just trying to be part of the crowd or are you really just cold-hearted?

    Carmela Kazmier



    the bus


    Everyday on my way to school
    I see houses
    beautiful houses.
    I see a lake
    drying up due to summer.
    I see schools
    filled with students.
    I see the gas station
    filled with cars.
    I see the people on my bus
    most of them are fake
    they lie to me
    they pretend to be my friend
    they use me
    they hurt my feelings
    when they use me
    I sit here and I cry
    this is what I see on the bus.

    Carmela Kazmier


    the game of love


    You look at me
    you look away
    which is it?
    love or lust
    are you playing me?
    like some kind of game
    or is it for real
    a love that could last.
    You notice me
    but are you afraid?
    You lead me on
    and then drive me away.

    Carmela Kazmier




    the rain falls


    I watch the clear rain
    it falls down
    down onto the green grass
    it is wet
    The clear rain falls down.

    Carmela Kazmier



    today daddy...


    When daddy came home today he hurt me
    Now I have a black eye
    My teacher asked me what happened
    When I went to school
    I told her that I ran into a sign.
    When I came back from the park today
    Daddy hit me
    It hurt me and I cried
    When I cried today he came back in
    And yelled to me ďShut the hell up, you little shitĒ
    So I went to my room and prayed
    But nothing happened
    Today when I came home from school
    He broke my arm
    My teacher wondered why I came in and had a cast
    She sent me to the nurse
    The nurse asked me how that happened
    I told her that I fell off of a swing
    And she believed me
    So when I got home I saw daddy wasnít home
    I went to the neighbors to hang out with Danny
    The boy next door.
    I heard a truck and it was daddy
    I tried to hide but he came in and said
    ďGet the hell back to the house, you bitchĒ
    So I ran home and was locked in my room
    Next morning it was time for school
    But before I left my daddy hurt me again
    I went to school with a broken nose and a very hurt wrist
    My teacher sent me to the guidance office
    The guidance lady said ďHunny, what happened to you? Ē
    I told her that I fell and hurt myself
    She told me to tell her the truth and that nobody would find out
    She asked me many questions
    I tried to answer them truthfully
    She let me leave and go on my way
    And I finished the rest of my school day
    When I got home I sat in my room
    Did my math problems and drew a picture
    Then my daddy returned home
    Of course he hit me and I went to bed and then the next morning
    I was dead
    It is sad and unfortunate
    I should have told somebody
    But I guess I never thought that their was a way out
    Iím sorry you didnít see it mommy
    But neither did I.

    Carmela Kazmier


    toys 'r' us


    Your so cute
    I can't deny it
    your thoughts and feelings
    you just don't hide them
    your true to me
    your true to us
    let's go shop
    at Toys 'R' Us

    Carmela Kazmier



    Walk Away


    You said youíd never hurt me
    But then you did
    If you didnít love me
    You couldíve told me
    You didnít even try
    To make it work
    Thatís truly
    What hurts the most
    Rascal flatts said it best
    But right now I just gotta
    Walk away from the rest.

    Carmela Kazmier



    why?


    You left us here
    all alone.
    To suffer from your choices
    We loved you.
    and didn't want you to go?
    so why did you?
    I'm mad that you did
    you had no reason
    you could have just left
    to go to another place
    but you had to leave permeantly
    Why?
    please
    tell me
    Why?

    Carmela Kazmier

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    why'd you go?


    Why'd you go?
    Why'd you take the easy way out?
    Why didn't you stay?
    Didn't you care?
    I know you guys fought
    but I know you loved her.
    But you are gone now
    you took your life.
    Why?
    Why?
    is all I can say
    she is sad
    mother is sad
    I am sad.
    I just want to know
    Why'd you take your life?

    Carmela Kazmier


    will i?


    As I sit inside
    I wonder what is to
    become of me tomorrow.
    Will I achieve me dreams?
    or will I live on the street?
    Will I have my friends tomorrow?
    or will they leave me here alone?
    Will my family stick by my side?
    or will they disown me?
    Will I pass through school?
    or will I be a failure?
    And I wonder
    Will I make it?

    Carmela Kazmier



    you


    Your funny jokes
    make me laugh
    your sense of style
    makes me smile
    when talking to me
    you make me blush
    I can't believe
    I care this much

    Carmela Kazmier



    you & her


    The way you look at her
    makes me sick
    because I know
    that used to be me
    but I let you go
    so easily
    I had you
    but now I don't
    I cry each night
    knowing that your with her.
    It breaks my heart
    when I see you
    holding her and kissing her.
    You talk about her a lot
    It's all I here
    I say that I'm happy for you
    but deep inside I'm crying
    There's nothing I can do
    except accept the fact
    that I don't have you anymore.

    Carmela Kazmier



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    please move this to the crative works section...nice poem...a bit well...glum though...

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    k, a poet with an idiot, great.

 

 

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