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Wow, that was dumb. It was so bad, that everyone that reads it will become dumber for having read it. And Thieves Den is really crap.
*Waits for someone to point out the grammar errors I left in this post on purpose, so that we can have our version of that page*
meh, what errors ?? -_-"
seems good to me lol (a bit weird for the 2nd sentence wording but that may be just me)
jakko, you want correction? here we go:
Your Sentence: Wow, that was dumb. It was so bad, that everyone that reads it will become dumber for having read it. And Thieves Den is really crap.
Correct Sentence: Wow, that was dumb. It was so bad, everyone who reads it will become dumber for having read it. Thieves Den is really crap.
You could substitute "And" with "Plus"
"Beer is the mind killer. Beer is the little death that brings total obliteration. I will face my beer. I will permit it to pass over me and through me, and when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. When the beer has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain."
Make beer, not war.
here is the correct versionOriginally Posted by Jakko
"oh snap, dat wuz whack! it wuz so freaked, all da peeps dat see it will just trip stupid on sight. and dat thieves den is some whack shit!"
"Grapes and grapes!"
bamb, you are now officially my hero.
Man, that topic was tag worthy. A simple question turns into a debate on the use of the word 'crap'. XDXDXD
you gotta love this guy
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Posted 5/23/2006 1:14:46 PM
message detail "Thieves Den is the adjective/noun of the sentence."
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