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    Chizabubble is offline Senior Member Always Around
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    Yup.
    Writing character profiles annoys me though. I'm impatient to just on with the story.

    I love Steal! <3

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    Valhallian_Snake is offline Member Frequent Poster
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    Something like this has been banging in my mind for a while. No idea of name, yet...

    The story goes on in the underground world of drow (ok, I confess -- I like the grey-skinned elves abit too much...). An upmoving House looks to employ a "security expert" (assasin). One of the head pristesses knows a promissing candidate, but there is a problem -- awhile ago, they had an affair, but he left her (very unwise move in drow society). Later he started a small mercenary squard.

    The assasin is hired, but he also tries to return to "good old times" with priestress. At first she belives it to be fun, but later he just gets in the way of important political alliance (reinforced by good medievil tradition -- political marriage). After he is openly told to step aside, the would-be groom is found dead. Naturally, this turns all the possible dogs on him -- including his ex-colleagues.
    Before getting awa from city, he pays final visit to the priestess. Not to asc her to run away together -- he understands too well, that she would have to leave to much behind. Just to tell the final "farewell". And... gets killed by her. "Letting such loose canon to ram freely is just too... dangerous for our ways".

    Maybe not the "best plot of all peoples and eons", but...

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    Valhallian_Snake is offline Member Frequent Poster
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    Something like this has been banging in my mind for a while. No idea of name, yet...

    The story goes on in the underground world of drow (ok, I confess -- I like the grey-skinned elves abit too much...). An upmoving House looks to employ a "security expert" (assasin). One of the head pristesses knows a promissing candidate, but there is a problem -- awhile ago, they had an affair, but he left her (very unwise move in drow society). Later he started a small mercenary squard.

    The assasin is hired, but he also tries to return to "good old times" with priestress. At first she belives it to be fun, but later he just gets in the way of important political alliance (reinforced by good medievil tradition -- political marriage). After he is openly told to step aside, the would-be groom is found dead. Naturally, this turns all the possible dogs on him -- including his ex-colleagues.
    Before getting awa from city, he pays final visit to the priestess. Not to asc her to run away together -- he understands too well, that she would have to leave to much behind. Just to tell the final "farewell". And... gets killed by her. "Letting such loose canon to ram freely is just too... dangerous for our ways".

    Maybe not the "best plot of all peoples and eons", but...

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    sperm worm is offline Senior Member Always Around
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    I've had an idea about a couple of things for a while now. I'm writing a fantasy novel about the idea, but it could also be a manga. if anyone wants to read what i've done so far just let me know.

    Heres what it is:
    Name: Duskwatch (reason for the title is that is sort of a dark manga, with alot of the main characters dying.

    Theme: Medieval Fantasy, in a different universe from this, and shifting to our universe and world.

    Plot: The main character finds a sword of great power by pure chance. It is the sword of the evil king of old, who fought against the gods in the war for control of the world. The swords power is triggered in a simple fight between the main character and some street thieves, and it marks the main character. He is transformed, no longer human. after this happens, he finds out that he is from the greatest mage clan of all time, and that he has innate magical powers. the sword layed a curse on him (for the sword is evil, kind of like the one ring from LOTR). he has to overcome the sword in a contest of will and magical power, so that he can survive. to do this, he must learn to wield his latent powers. He goes to the mages of his world to try and learn to wield his powers. when he reaches the mage-city, he finds out that there has been an accident. a demon has escaped from hell, due to the misguided experiment of one of the mages. The sword the main character carries is the only thing that can kill it. also, the demon made a portal to a different universe (our universe), and left. No mage has been able to enter that portal, because no one has enough power to pass through unharmed. the main characters power could allow him to pass through. The main character has to learn to wield his powers and subdue the sword so that he can defeat the demon before the universes merge completely and the worlds explode.
    Thats as far as ive gotten so far, but i have some other things worked out. the main character will recieve some companions, but most of them will be killed by the demon or its fellows (it will be able to summon other demons). they will form up with some people from our world, and finally kill the demon. the worlds will be forever meshed though, and everything will be changed. Let me know what you guys think


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    Quiraikotsu is offline Senior Member Community Builder
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    hmm when i read that understanding how the character is through the way they talk to people, talk about people the way they think etc, i figured i want mine to get across the message that there are only 'grey areas' in life. there's nothing that is totally black the bottom of a mug which has still got a lil bit of coffee in it for the past 6 months. and i also want to give the message 'we're all hypocrites' ^^

    and nice ideas people- so damn jealous of those manga authors out there who came up with origonal ideas. grrr

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    sperm worm is offline Senior Member Always Around
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    i can kind of grasp what you are saying, but not really. please, try to work on your english a bit. sorry for being a pain in the ass, but i really have trouble with that sort of thing.


 

 
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