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    Cool Create Your Zanpakuto 2.0

    Ok so this is the new Create Your Zanpakuto thread I thought that we could update it a bit. This one will be a little different in the way it's set up.

    Example

    Name:
    Gender:
    Spirit Appearance: (250 x 450)
    Personality: Optional
    Inner World: (450 x 250)
    Sealed Form: Doesn't really need to be a max size just don't go over board.

    Shikai

    Release Command:
    Shikai Appearance:Again there isn't a set size to the image but be reasonable.
    Shikai Abilities: No image needed for this.

    Bankai - You dont have to have one.

    Bankai Name:
    Bankai Appearance: No set size for the image again lol.
    Bankai Abilities:

    You do not need to post a image for the ones I have pointed out but you must write about them, if you post an image it can be a link which is best if you dont want to change the size, but if you doen't use a link stay within the set size. The images dont need to be ones you've gotten off the net they can be your own drawings.

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    Name: Deception
    Gender:Male

    Spirit Appearance: (250 x 450) Appearance of fallen angel with glowing radiant blue eyes. He has no wings or anything else angelic except his perfect facial features, hair that looks alive and stunning and perfect speech. He also has gray armor donned all over his body. He looks like an elite warrior.

    Personality: Very very comfortable to look at. Might even look friendly. He is actually a sadist deep down and loves to catch people when they are trusting.

    Inner World: It looks like pillars jutting out of the ground with circle platforms on top of the pillars. They continue like this as far as the eye can see. Below is a black abyss with nothing under it except the faint blue glow of fire that the pillars emit. Above is a fairly beautiful landscape that looks like a lake reflection of a mountain, valley and forest. Seems so close yet so far away.

    Sealed Form: Seals into two small short swords. If I were to describe how they look with the scabbard than it looks like Kakashi's sword a little bit. The hilt and guard are very simple and circular and the blade is short perfect for pulling out. They both look like this and go across the back in an X pattern.

    Shikai

    Release Command: Terrorize, Deception
    Shikai Appearance: I didn't make a picture yet but it's shikai takes both of the swords and scabbards and forms them into gauntlets for his hands and legs. It also puts a biotech looking pair of goggles on his face to help him react in close combat.
    Shikai Abilities: Reiatsu blasts to come out from any where on his gauntlets but he can also put the power behind his hits instead of releasing it. Also his general battle prowess is increased.
    Very physical hands on shikai.

    Bankai

    Bankai Name: Wreck It All and Hide No More...Bankai
    Bankai Appearance: Along with the gauntlets most of his body appears to be covered in gray armor. Including his head. His eyes glow blue but it leaks out almost like smoke.
    Bankai Abilities: The bankai is a bit special because the user has to have a general disregard for those around him. Because his zanpakutou spirit has such a strong influence this gives it the reason for his name and command.
    When it's released the user automatically goes unconscious for around 3 minutes as his mind and body adjust to the full armor he now has. As he is unconscious the only thing he feels and does is the influence of the zanpakuto. Anyone coming near him is shot by reiatsu blasts. These can go from any part of his armor, including the back. He cannot move however while he is unconscious. Even though he feels the influence of the spirit he doesn't actually get possessed by him. Therefore, his body cannot move and a defense mechanism is set in place. He is surrounded by a ball of dense reiatsu. It's not that the reiatsu is a lot and protects him, it's that it's so dense that its virtually impenetrable.
    When he regains consciousness all the reiatsu around him disappears and he retains the ability to shoot blasts from anywhere. His speed and cutting power increase. The higher velocity he has when flying at you make the attack sharper and stronger.

    There are two drawbacks to this whole thing.
    1. He attacks whoever is near when he has lost consciousness
    2. After a certain point (when he gets tired and starts to lose his stamina) he becomes unconscious again and shoots reiatsu blasts. This time there is no dense reiatsu shield.

    Edit: I'll try to put pictures up soon. Sorry it's so long but I think this is cool. I wanted to give a descriptive picture.
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    Name: Amazing Blind Twins (only a nickname)
    Gender: Female
    Spirit Appearance:Bigger Image

    Personality: Very smart but plays the dummy has a british accent, believes that fighting is always the last resort but if her name is called she will respond. The reason for her nickname is because she always wished she was a twin so that she had someone to talk too when I was busy but she realized the closes thing to a twin was me, she tells me that I should call her amazing because of what she can do, and she always says im blind because I fail to see the obvious and I say the same to her
    Inner World:London Eye
    Sealed Form:


    Shikai

    Release Command: Burn the Air in Time, Amazing Blind Twins
    Shikai Appearance:

    Shikai Abilities:
    Wind Sphere, Blazing Prison: A prison that surrounds the enemy with wind that if touched will slice into them, the prison only last for 5mins after 4mins the wind that the prison is made of will turn to fire for the last min.
    Silent Razor: Wind is fired from the zanpaktou in a crescent shape its only 50cm in length, 3 can be fired at once the attack doesn't need to touch the enemy to damage them if they come within 2inches of it they can still be hurt.
    Still Wind: This attack can only be used twice, 2 crescents 30cm in size are fired from the zanpaktou if they hit the enemy they will slow down for 10secs, if I miss the enemy I can make the 2 crescents explode.

    Bankai

    Bankai Name: Blazing Wind Mantis (Her true name. Her nickname is an anagram of this)
    Bankai Appearance: Look at Spirit Appearance thats how the zanpaktous look.
    Bankai Abilities:
    Blazing Razor: Same as Silent Razor but this time 5 can be fired at once and the size has changed from 50cm to 2metres and the range of which you cannot come within has changed to 6inches. Last time when the attack hit it only cut the enemy this time the part that is hit goes up in flames.
    Reading Wind: Reiatsu is mixed in with the air that lets me read every movement my opponent gonna make this can be used 3 times in a battle but the time shortens every time its used.
    1st) 10min
    2nd) 6min
    3rd) 3min
    Dragons Breath:
    Fire: When fire is said after Dragons Breath I can breathe out fire which turns most things to ash.
    Wind: When Wind is said after Dragons Breath wind can be shot at rapid speed that will slice through most objects.
    Pray: A one shot attack that once used leaves me exhausted, Wind surrounds the body and the twin zanpaktous are lit with blue flames, the flames stretch a metre in length from the blade, the flames are not hotter but do burn things faster in this state speed also doubles. This only last for 2mins once it's used the zanpaktou returns to it's sealed form.

    And thats my zanpaktou I tried not to make it too powerful so most of the strong attacks have timelimits and drawbacks, the only moves that can be used without a drawback is Silent Razor, Blazing Razor and Dragons Breath.

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    I think we should rate people's Zanpakuto's on this page. Just to see if it's not ridiculous.
    Also to see who is actually reading .
    And if you're serious about if wanting to hear something about yours then (re)post it here. Put up a picture. I'm going to be putting one up by tonight.

    BF yours being able to read opponents is pretty beastly. But I think your shikai swords should match hers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Yazen View Post
    I think we should rate people's Zanpakuto's on this page. Just to see if it's not ridiculous.
    Also to see who is actually reading .
    And if you're serious about if wanting to hear something about yours then (re)post it here. Put up a picture. I'm going to be putting one up by tonight.

    BF yours being able to read opponents is pretty beastly. But I think your shikai swords should match hers.
    Yeah I think we should be able to rate them as well, might try and sort that out later, maybe we should just give +1 or -1 in a post and give reason why. This site should really have a Rep system.

    Yeah I know but it's only there movements, meaning if they were gonna raise there arm to swing a sword or fire a gun I could only read that but I can't read what will be fired from there weapon, so it's beastly to a point .
    If I was to go up against someone like Starrk none released it wouldn't really work because he does take a fighting stance when doing a cero, and it wouldn't be much use on Barragan because he doesn't take a stance for any attack.
    Her Zanpaktou in that picture are how mine look in Bankai, so in that picture she's in Bankai.

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    I put pictures up. Really shitty ones that I drew in 5 min on index cards. lol.

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    lol it doesn't matter they can be drawn or taken from the net they can even be taken from other manga, just as long as you give description.

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    name: Black Scorpion
    Gender: Female
    Spirit Appearance: A Women in black robe like cothing with black armour on here torso, and she has long black hair, blue eyes and a very pale skin color. She has huge Dragon Wings that have Scorpion claws on them, a huge Scorpion stinger on her back just between her wings thats attached to the armour.

    Personality: Has no confidence, very insecure of the way she looks(mainly the huge wings and stinger) she kinda acts like hanatarou. she only confident when im around because im the only person she trusts and she knows im strong.

    Inner World: An infinite number of spheres hovering in a huge empty black abyss. Each sphere differs in size(they vary from being the size of a house or as big as a sky scraper)they all glow slightly blue(so all you can see off in the distance are what look like blue stars) and are widely spaced out so that someone with wings could fly around and have fun but close enough so that you could shunpo from one sphere to the other. Each sphere has there own gravitational pull but doesn't interfere with each other so that you can walk on there surface all the way around the sphere without falling off(If you jump to high off of a sphere you will fall onto another sphere if you pass to close enough to one). The spheres are also indestructible so you cant do any damage to them during training.
    Sealed Form: Just a normal Katana.

    Shikai

    Release Command: Crawl Out, Black Scorpion
    Shikai Appearance: tried to make it look like a scorpion holding a sword with its claws

    Shikai Abilities: Poison-Type Zanpakuto

    Stinger Extend: I can extend the stinger on the hilt of my sword and control it as if it were an extra limb, its extremely fast moving and and very maneuverable(think of it like Scorpion's spear from mortal kombat). The stinger contains a venom that can enhance the pain of any of my attacks 50 times over and the more times i strike you with it the more the pain is enhanced,(say if i injected some venom into you, you would instantly feel like someone stabbed you with a sword because the pain of the sting is being enhanced and if i stabbed you again the pain of both wounds would be even worse) the venom takes effect instantly. Range is about 0-60 meters

    Bankai

    Bankai Name: Black Scorpion Steel Dragon
    Bankai Appearance: changes from a scorpion look to a dragon look http://www.freewebs.com/draconhall/Dragon%20Sword1.jpg
    Bankai Abilities: Poison Fire-Type Zanpakuto

    Shedding Exoskeleton: Can only be done once per battle, allows me to heal any damage done to me during battle(kind of like orochimaru's technique). the disadvantage is it take about 5 mins to prepare the technique.

    Stinger Extend: Same as shikai except the stinger is on my back its faster and more maneuverable and the venom is 50 times more potent making it enhance the pain 2500 more than normal(so your in for a real treat if you get stabbed by this thing more than once). Range is about 0-80 meters

    Steel Wing Shield: I basically use my wing(s) as a shield to block an attack(my wings are super strong, able to block almost any attack).

    Fire Blast: I breathe a huge ball of fire from my zanpakuto or my claws(the fire is extremely hot).

    Blazing Slash: By shooting fire from the tip of my zanpakuto I can use fire to increase the attack range of my zanpakuto(this fire has the ability to cut just like a sword but is extremely hot).

    Cremation: My Wings Burst into Flames and i flap them around and the fire flies off of them and at my opponent(this attack has a very wide attack range but cannot travel vary far)

    Claw Crush: I use the claws on the tips of my wings to catch my enemy and either crush him or hold him in down to finish him/her with my stinger.


    Advantages and disadvantages of bankai

    advantages: Im have a very high defense against long ranged attacks.

    disadvantages: Im not very fast in bankai so i have to focus mainly on my ranged attacks until my enemy comes close enough to catch and finish off. im weak against close ranged attacks. its not that stealthy and i don't like it that much since its my style to be more of a stealthy person so i don't use it as much.
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    Check it, a mechanical zanpakuto is pure awesomeness.

    Name: Mashinken
    Gender: None
    Spirit Appearance:
    Personality: Does not like small talk, only speaks after analyzing the situation thoroughly. Is very blunt and precise.
    Inner World:
    Sealed Form: A standard sized katana with a seemingly typical appearance. However on closer inspection, one would find that the zanpakutou appears as if it were forged using the best of modern technology. The sword's black handle lacks any decoration or wrappings, looks like it was made out of some kind of tough plastic with a rubbery grip, and molded with a handgrip. The tsuba is a shiny silver, circular hand-guard while the blade appears to be made from high-quality steel, heat-treated, and precisely sharpened and weighted. The Japanese characters 'tyoo watto' (1 trillion watts) are etched along the side of the blade. When Mashinken is drawn from its scabbard, the air around it hums deeply and electricity crackles around the blade.

    Shikai

    Release Command: Activate, Mashinken
    Shikai Appearance: The sealed zanpakuto splits in various locations and transforms inward, leaving a less fanciful looking weapon without a blade.


    then...



    Shikai Abilities:

    Force-Edge - The laser blade is a hyper-compression of spirit particles with one ability. When Mashinken's edge comes into contact with an object, if the area in contact is not stronger than Mashinken's edge, the object will be cut.

    Here is an example, let's say Ichigo blasts a Getsuga Tenshou with 1000 energy and Mashinken is just 500 energy. However, even though Getsuga Tenshou is a 1000, its energy is spread out in a wide space, while Mashinken's energy is compressed into a single line. When Mashinken is used to block Getsuga Tenshou, it is not 500 vs 1000 but more along the lines of, 450 vs something <50, which results in Getsuga being cut in half.

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    Ok I have 2 ideas


    firstly

    Name: crescent wind (I don’t know the Japanese for crescent so it would be (crescent) kaze)

    Sealed look: hand fan

    Element: wind

    Zanpaktou Spirit: a man height tornado with large black/red eyes

    Call: storm cresentwind

    Shi-kai: the fan transforms into a thin pole 2 meters long from the top and bottom of which a blade emerges meeting in the center as a crescent the blade then thickens to completion of the shi-kai

    Shi-kai abilities: (tornado wave) crescent wind is waved like a fan whipping up a storm forming into a small tornado twice the height of the wielder

    Ban-Kai: the crescent blade evaporated into fine green dust appearing as a circle on the chest of the wielder and to colour the eyes entirely green leaving the pole free to defend from obvious close combat attacks

    Call: Storm raging crescent wind of changing weather

    Ban-Kai abilities: (Tsunami strike) from the center of the circle a glowing green pulse grows stronger to cover the whole circle at that point an all encompassing tsunami appears to defeat the enemy
    (Cyclone field) the circle on the chest of the user breaks at the top and begins to spiral when the speed reaches its maximum 17 cyclones appear surrounding the user to be commanded by him/her


    secondly

    Name: godsclaw (again my embarrassing lack of Japanese ousts me here as well)

    Sealed look: a black glove with a white palm and a short katana

    Element: blood (id say healing but it seems inappropriate)

    Zanpaktou Spirit: an ancient double bent man with an immense aura

    Call: allow me to heal the injuries others bare to me godsclaw

    Shi-kai: the fingers of the glove grow thicker and longer in proportion with the thickness, the palm of the glove which was white now bares a red cross which is also now found on the top of the hand as well the katana stays as short as before but the blade turns white

    Shi-kai abilities: from the palm of the hand a white light is emitted to heal injuries with the exception of amputation of larger limbs and healing the dead it also takes time to heal as well

    Call: allow me to heal the injuries others bare to me benevolent godsclaw of healing grace

    Ban-Kai: the surroundings of the wielder glow in an odd golden glow

    Ban-Kai abilities: when an enemy enters the area of golden light the light its self inflicts horrific injuries to the enemy but when ally enters the light it heals them to perfection with the exception of bringing back the dead , also when a neutral person enters the light 2 archangels shall appear to judge the heart of the person
    JMiller

 

 
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