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Spirit Appearance: Two guys, one is well dressed in a tuxedo with a top hat casting a shadow on his face causing it to be unseen the other is a knight in rusty armour whose movements are very slow but agressive
Personality: It's personality is always changing tries to avoid battle where possable
Inner world: This inner world is completely pitch black all that can be seen is the people within it it stretches on for eternity
Sealed form: A single blade which is worn from battle and looks badly made and fragile
Release Command: Kujiku Kaichiku
Shikai Appearance: When the command is said the blade splits into two blades which grow sharper and longer and look finely crafted they have a blue handel with 3 black diamonds inside it and a blue blade with very faint writing carved into it
Shikai Abilities: When in shikai form the blade gains the abilit to change into a liquid or a gas and has the ability to move however after every attack it must return to its normal the ability to change between solid liquid and gas gives it many battle strategies
Bankai Name: Kansei Kaichiku
Bankai Appearance: The blades melt into a huge ball of liquid
Bankai abilities: Can completely change shape and still change between solid liquid and gas it can also absorb reiatsu from it's surroundings in order to gain power and size however this decreases it's accuracy and speed it cna also do vice versa. It can copy objects of the same size but not one that is bigger or smaller than it.
This is something I thought of really quickly.
sealed form would be a ceremonial type sword that isn't quite suitable for war.
release command: bang down, percussion
shikai: sword disappears and a drum strapped across the chest with two drum maces materialize. Bangs the drums to increase body's agi, adrenaline and focus. Can use the maces for close combat but this shikai excels in using longer range sound blasts. The offensive isn't that strong. It's strong enough to get survive. When the user stands out of combat but has allies in combat he can use his drums beats to keep his buddies pumped and focused.
bankai. A big ape with a drum and two maces appear. He is roughly the size of Kommamura's bankai. The only thing that changes with the user is he uses a two handed drum mace. It packs a pretty good punch. The ape can do everything the shikai can do but on a completely different scale. It's meant for war parties and can instill fear in the enemies while greatly increasing it's allies battle prowess. Can also attack if something big tries to attack it but it's not really fast.
Ziazca- your bankai reminds me of seele schneider. stalemate between them if they crossed swords? I do like the idea of being a machine type zanpakuto.
Thunderclap- Honestly your shikai is pretty nice. If you were on captain speed level it would be pretty OP. Your bankai seems more like a ressurecion than a bankai. It's pure warfare.
Jmiller- I don't really like wind type things. They seem pretty easy to beat. Your second one though is needs a bit more detail. How big is the area of the light? It seems like a pretty situational bankai. Like maybe you're near it or maybe someone is just way too far cause they're busy battling. If it was a big area of light affecting the battlefield than it would be pretty good but there would have to be some type of limit on how much damage it could do compared to how much healing is going on at the time. If you have lots of enemies and lots of people getting hurt it can't really be doing HORRIFIC amounts of damage and healing for a bunch at the same time. but idk.
I. The Thousand Master
Name: Thousands Master
Spirit Appearance: One tall guy wearing a white, long coat that covers most of his body. He has normal eyes and hair. Inside his coat is two Japanese swords, rarely you will see them.
Personality: He is very collected and calm, to the point he can stay silent for many years. He is the type of doing a lot of things without any words and explains.
Inner world: This word is a sea of swords. There is a monstrous beast and he himself sitting in his throne made of swords. The user trained here must cross the sea by walking on swords. If the user falls 3 times, the Thousand Master let the beast eat the user.
Sealed form: Twin ordinary Japanese swords. They are very light, short and have a white blue color.
Release Command: Setsuna
Shikai Appearance: When the command is said, the user let his hands touch the twin swords, and it looks like he's just used them and now he sheathes them, letting out a twin "cling" sounds (the sound when 2 sword done sheathing to their scabbard at the same time)
Shikai Abilities: The shikai enables the user work his twin swords so fast, that he can draw his twin swords, cut his opponents and then sheathe them, all actions in just a setsuna (1/4 second). But there is a draw back in this: The user cannot move more than 2 metres, since his focus is in moving his swords so fast, his body feels so numb and he almost cannot budge his ass. Also, the twin swords are curved, so when they are sheathed so fast, they cannot be completely sheathed. If the user want to use them again, he must sheathe his swords completely, by "let his hands touch the twin swords, letting out a twin "cling" sounds" and this action makes a delay after the Thousand Master uses Setsuna.
Bankai Name: Thousands Blades
Bankai Appearance: The user becomes the spirit appearance of the Thousand Master.
Bankai abilities: The twin swords multiply in the sky to many more swords, making a random numbers of swords between 1000 and 9999 swords, and form like a sea of swords. This sea then fall naturally to the opponents' heads, and the Thousand Master is granted the ability to swap with any sword in the sea and freely use them to his likings. When the sea is done falling, it accumulates and form a tsunami headed toward the opponent.
After using this Bankai, the user is rendered unable to move. His Thousand Master's coat binds him for 3 minutes, and he cannot do anything else but use "Setsuna". While in this state, when the user is attacked, his twin swords will multiply to add 2 more swords, hovers about to suicide the user if the user asks them.
While in bankai mode, the user can use Setsuna without the sheathing delay, and get an increase in defense, can endure explosions, his long coat cannot be cut of pierced through, immune to any kind of telepathic attacks. However, the user is slowed by 30%.
II. The Icire
Spirit Appearance: An ordinary boy. He looks tough, confident, strong and has a scar on his face. His right eye is fiery red. His left eye is icy blue. He wears boots that have decorative wings attached, a wooden stick that has half of it burned and the other half frozen.
Personality: He is hot headed, very arrogant who will stomp on anything that blocks his path. While in combat, he look very calculated and calm, remain silent and do anything, even dirty or cheating to defeat his opponents. He usually talks a lot, but he never talks to his enemies or talks in any battles.
Inner world: This world is a never-ending land of ice with a sky of fire. When the user trains with him, he usually swaps the sky and the land, and very usually likes to make a maze made from fire grounds and ice walls, to create illusions and flame paths to prevent solving the maze.
Sealed form: A wooden stick that has half of it burned and the other half frozen.
Release Command: Burn! or Froze!
Shikai Appearance: When the command is said, the stick flows a pair of fire wings from its burned half, or blossoms a flower made of ice from its frozen half.
Shikai Abilities: The pair of fire wings has a great area of effect, can be used as a large fire great axe, and can shoot the wings to the opponents from afar. Due to the very light weight of the stick, the fire wings make it even lighter, make the user's attacks very fast, very far. The ice flower is huge, make the stick become very heavy as a mace, so the user's attack will be much slower but very strong. The ice flower can be dropped off the stick to the ground, making it grows under the ground to be more ice trees, then blossoms many flowers. (after shooting the fire wings or dropping the ice flower, the stick will return to its original state)
Bankai Name: Elemental Destruction
Bankai Appearance: The user will be covered in flames, while all of his body become a statue of ice. His left is and right eye become the color of the Spirit Appearance
Bankai abilities: The user's right hand is covered in a huge blue flame, and his left hand is covered in a ball of white crystal ice. He then let his two hands meets, and a blast will start from them, shooting a huge ray of light forward. Anything and any element meets the ray will be obliterated. After the ray is done shooting, the path that the ray traveled will have no air, so the air will be sucked into the path and the user's hands, pulling the enemies (if they have luckily avoided the ray) to the user's hands.
While in bankai mode, the user is invulnerable to fire and ice attacks. Also get better defense thank to the flame and ice covered him. He moves faster due to the fire, and hit harder due to the ice with him. After using Elemental Destruction, the user is stripped of his bankai mode, and he cannot shoot the fire wings or drop the ice flower. His fire wings and ice flower are also weaker.
III. The Blacksmith
Spirit Appearance: An ordinary man. Anything on him look normal, but he carries a lot of keys with him and usually turns his keys around his fingers swiftly. He has a strong voice, and just like to talk to himself. He sometimes all covered in keys and in those times, whoever comes near him will be hit and fly very far.
Personality: An emo. He observes much before making moves. His moves are fast, strong and short. He is the silent type. Also, he is obsessed in making keys.
Inner world: This world is a free-to-fly infinite sky with no land. Here and there, infinite numbers of doors and keys floating freely. Only the Blacksmith know what keys in the sky match what doors. The user spent a lot of time try grabbing keys to find the door that the Blacksmith was hiding.
Sealed form: A very large old key. It is 2 metres long.
Release Command: "Open the door!" or "Lock!"
Shikai Appearance: When the command is said, the key becomes larger or smaller (x3 to x5 times from normal), but the weight does not change.
Shikai Abilities: The shikai allows the user to open any physical door. The key will transform to match the door's lock, and unlock it. The user can also transform ("Lock!") any object he is holding into a key, and transformed keys can be "Unlock!" to become the original object. Any object can be transformed, even zanpakuto. While in key form, zanpakuto cannot have any connection with its owner. It can still talk to the Blacksmith and the one Locked it.
Bankai Name: "Lock on!" (this is similar sound to "Lock All!")
Bankai abilities: When the user enter Bankai, all the weapons in 1km around him automatically transformed into keys and fly toward the user, even if someone are holding them. The user can choose the weapons that will not transform (to avoid disarming his allies). The user can turn anything in his hands, not just weapons into keys. He can Unlock and Lock keys with just his eyes, no need to hold the keys (but he can only Lock objects to become keys if no one is touching them). Also, the user gets increased armor, increased attack power and have an ability to control the keys to fly on his will. (think that your zanpakuto turned to a key, then fly toward you and turn to the zanpakuto, thrusting you. Really hurt)
In bankai mode, the user can "Unlock Creation" any object, including zanpakuto: He place his left hand on anything that doesn't have life (rock, sand, water, building, etc.), and imagine about the object he is going to create. His left hand will suck the thing he touched and his left hand produces the object he wants. The object will exist long or short depending on the thing he sucked. He can Unlock Creation zanpakuto but those fake zanpakuto doesn't have any ability and are just normal swords. (imagine he touched sand, and his left hand make a fake zanpakuto looks like your zanpakuto that lasts for 30 mins, then give you the fake and steal your zanpakuto.) Certainly, the Blacksmith cannot Unlock Creation any life forms.
Name: Kumai Gareille Castella
Spirit Appearance: A nubile girl dressed in blue.
Personality: She is kind and very soft. But inside, she is mature, and very smart. She knows nothing more than her own well-being, a selfish one. She always prefers gambling, and chooses what is best for her. In short, she is calm, opportunist, and never shows her true face. She is also the daughter of Thousand Master's best friend, Chiasma Castella the Shadow Lord. She truly loves Thousand Master, but knowing he never accepts her, she always tries to kill the user of Thousand Master and the Thousand Master himself.
Inner world: This world is a land of green grass and blue sky. A huge oak tree stands firm beside a large lake with no waves, like a mirror. Floating in the sky are gamble cards and blue crystals just like in Terranigma. In this world, the user in trainning must find a joker card in the grass. That joker is the Chronette
Sealed form: Many zig-zac notes with razor sharp covers. They can be thrown, or be kept between fingers to be slashing weapons. Although they are small, they are very light, and auto attaches to user's fingers, so in term of close range combat, the user has good defense and unexpected swings.
Release Command: "Taking note"
Shikai Appearance: When the command is said, the user can open the notes and user various assisting spells.
Shikai Abilities: The note can do a sudden push to help the user jump freaking high or landing safely, do healing spells, defense wall. Also, the user can copy any skills the opponent just used, except bankai to the note and use them later. The spell will perform depends on how strong the user are. The longer a spell is kept in the note, the stronger the spell get. If the note is used right after it copies a spell or a skill, the performance will be extremely weak. If the skill needs a zanpakuto to perform, like a shikai, the note will fake the skill like it is real completely. After using, the note returns to the blank note, waiting to be reused.
Bankai Name: Extreme Gamble
Bankai Appearance: All the zig-zac notes will fly around the user, and the user will lose all her clothes, letting the notes hide her private parts.
Bankai abilities: All the spells and skills used 1 hour before and 30 minutes after the bankai release will be automatically taken notes, giving all the notes into the Chronette's hands.
The notes will automatically take hits and shield the Chronette when she is attacked. The Chronette can not use physical attacks, since the notes hovering around her prevent her to do close combat, and they also block her throwing notes. The Chronette is slowed very much in moving as her notes are blocking her way. Everytime a note takes hit, it will explode and release the skill within. The Chronette can use a large amount of her notes to cast a "Time Hole" that, will suck anything doesn't have life come near to it. The Chronette then can make them reappear whenever she wants, as long as she is in bankai mode. The time hole can be so large that it can cover a whole building, but it will leave lifeforms unharmed, even if it engulfs them before. (imagine you use your bankai, and she use Time Hole to wrap you and absorb it. When you continue fighting, she makes your bankai reappear and hit your ass)
In bankai mode, the Chronette can perform a "Time Lapse", which put a timer onto the opponents. If after 30 minutes, the opponent cannot defeat the Chronette, the opponent be forced to "Leap through time" and in the state of himself/herself a random amount of years earlier (10-99). This move can be successful or suicidal. Also, while in bankai, the Chronette got no armor, almost zero movement speed, and no physical attack power. She can only cast spells in this state.
Last edited by nguadien; 08-31-2011 at 06:23 PM.
^ You better trade mark those ideas man, Kube is starving right now.
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Those are just some ideal characters. There are more (5 guys, 2 girls), and I just think writing 4 out are enough.
Thanks for your opinion man, I really like those characters above.
Amazing ideas I hope more people create some.
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