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    Xiphias is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    Default First Try ~.~

    I think this is my first post here even though i've been registered for ages....

    I don't know if this really belongs here but I thought you guys could give me some critcism.. It's not done fully done I have to redo some lines and stuff ~.~ but I was hoping you could you know say some stuff this is my first try at this kinda thing btw.

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    http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/7...136copyfj6.jpg
    // didn't know what to do with the box ~.~ should i get rid of the writing or leave it?

    Original
    http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/9192/38136uw6.jpg

    Fixed the edit was to dark in some areas ~.~

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    erachima is offline Senior Member Always Around
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    Uhm, you're applying as a cleaner?

    Let's see... your edit isn't too bad, though it's a bit dark and hard to see. There are some scuffy bits you missed throughout, especially in the bottom-right panel.

    Uryuu freaky, pale and geeky,
    how do your powers grow?
    "With gloves and scars and silver stars
    and swords that I shoot from a bow,
    yes, swords that I shoot from a bow."

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    Xiphias is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    Quote Originally Posted by erachima
    Uhm, you're applying as a cleaner?

    Let's see... your edit isn't too bad, though it's a bit dark and hard to see. There are some scuffy bits you missed throughout, especially in the bottom-right panel.
    Editor really ~.~ I was gonna do it awhile ago but some stuff came up so ~.~ .. I just now got around to reading the tutorial from the guy and did this like during class. I still need to finish reading the tutorial :'/, the levels i'm trying to get the hang of it so i'm kinda sorry about the dark areas o.o. I think the tutorial goes into scruffy bits.

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    Yeah, basically what Erachima said. The image is overlevelled in the upper part especially. Often you cannot remove dirt by just levelling, in those cases you should hit M and start to select/hit del/repeat... It's an annoying procedure, I know. As for the line-thickening you did by using the Unsharp Mask (I'm guessing), maybe you should try leaving that out at all. To me, the page looks a little cleaner, but it looses a lot of its original sharpness and fine print.

    Edit:
    You can leave in the box at some times, at other times you are required to remove it. You should talk about that with the group you are editing for (once you are accepted to a group.)
    Last edited by miyagiCE; 09-26-2006 at 02:31 PM.

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    Another piece of advice on cleaning up scrudgy bits, though this applies to colour files more: If you're really having a hard time with them, because of the image's resolution or what have you, it can sometimes help to invert the image.

    This is especially useful when there's some really pale colour like, say, light yellow on white and you're straining your eyes to see it. When inverted, it become bright blue on black, which is much easier to see. In black and white, it would just become a lighter grey on black, but that is easier to see as well.

    Uryuu freaky, pale and geeky,
    how do your powers grow?
    "With gloves and scars and silver stars
    and swords that I shoot from a bow,
    yes, swords that I shoot from a bow."

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    Xiphias is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    Ok...

    Used a differnt method to level it this time.
    Tried to clean it a bit more. // Forgot 2 dots in lower right did in like 1 min.
    I messed up the house imo...
    Touched up the nose and the one wheel ~.~

    http://i10.tinypic.com/3zrmatc.jpg
    Last edited by Xiphias; 09-26-2006 at 04:07 PM.

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    chap 140 ,want to hear ur opinion and for this one!
    rapidshare link:
    http://rapidshare.de/files/33825113/AirGear138.zip
    and sendspace link:
    http://www.sendspace.com/file/3ksq3j

    my job how is it?

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    Xiphias san, how long u need in order to clean the raw/original.

    i still learning the photoshop(basic) T_T
    No morning without Dawn, No night without Dusk, No one Else but Me //by ri

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    Xiphias is offline Junior Member Newbie
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    Quote Originally Posted by raveneros
    Xiphias san, how long u need in order to clean the raw/original.

    i still learning the photoshop(basic) T_T
    I can do sigs fine but I just signed up to be a editor but he said he needed cleaners so I said I would try. I just now tried to do it today, I guess i've been doing Photoshop for a little less then a year? On and off mostly though.

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    one more question, how long u take to edit ur "first try" images?
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