I think this is my first post here even though i've been registered for ages....
I don't know if this really belongs here but I thought you guys could give me some critcism.. It's not done fully done I have to redo some lines and stuff ~.~ but I was hoping you could you know say some stuff this is my first try at this kinda thing btw.
// didn't know what to do with the box ~.~ should i get rid of the writing or leave it?
Fixed the edit was to dark in some areas ~.~